GOD BLESS AMERICA(home of the semi-free and fake)
 

I LOVE THIS COUNTRY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

the president hates iraqis cocky free trade blocking
skeletons in his closet alcholic somehow its not shocking
tax cuts so the racist rich git richer quicker
while the slums git worse how easy is it to git liqour

nobodies safe don't think you're protected
how much do the elderly pay for medicine
no one wonder the #1 industry in america
is fucking dope peddling drug selling
celebrating the war scarred veterans

apathetic rhetoric meddles in bushes competitors
who's gonna stop the madness kill these predators
and don't mistake this traitorus metaphor
but i don't trust these democratic sin-a-tors
each muddling the puzzle like modern day minators

war torn agent orange anthrax and SARS
CPS can't fund the people to save kids from scars
but our leaders drive brand new cars
and can afford to sip brandy and smoke cuban cigars
modern day czars to much power i think i'll move to mars

I LOVE THIS COUNTRY OR MAYBE NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

flow was off, some good points, but it could've been alot better in content an' just general inner rhyme... I wasn't feelin' it really... elevate 1

thank you upping

IT WAS SLUGGISH BUT I SEE THE ABILITY IN IT AND YOU CAN DO THIS BETTER I KNOW IT KEEP DROPPING YOU WILL ELIVATE

"feedback is critical in elevation" thank you. my last uppin