You Want Real??
 

NIGGAZ BE LIKE KAM DON'T SPIT REAL RAP, HIS FLOW AINT DEEP/BUT BEFORE YA HEAR DA REAL I ADVISE YA TO TAKE A SEAT/ CUZ WHEN I SPEAK, THE FLOW MAY NOT COME OUT OUT CLEAR/ CUZ WHEN MY TEARS HIT THE PAPER, THE INK TENDS TO SMEAR/
A NIGGA COULD NEVA SAY KAM AINT LIVIN WHAT HE PUTS IN HIS RAP/ CUZ I SPIT BOUT WHAT I LIVE. NIGGA WHAT YOU KNOW BOUT THAT?/ NIGGA WHAT YOU KNOW BOUT HEARIN YOUR PARENTS ARGUE, WHILE U HIBERNATE YOUR SELF IN UR ROOM/ TRYIN TO PUT WORDS ON PAPER YOU HOPE SOMEONE WILL FIND IN THE DAYS WHEN ULL BE LAYIN UNDER YOUR TOMB/ OR JUST TRYIN TO BE SOMTIN IN LIFE, THAT PEOPLE ARE TELLLIN U ULL NEVER BE/ WHILE KEEPIN YOUR LUNGS FILLED WIT HAZE IN AN EVIROMENT CONSISTIN OF NOTIN BUT GANGSTAZ AND NEGATIVITY/ BUT SINCE I AINT REAL, U MUST NOT KNOW BOUT TRYIN TO GIVE UR ALL TO TO YOUR FAMILY, BUT THEIR NEVER CONTENT/ OR HAVIN YOUR BEST FRIENDS CALL U DURING THE PROCESS OF THEIR SUICIDAL ATTEMPT/ WHEN U TRY TO GIVE UR SELF A REASON WHY U SHOULD LET URSELF LIVE TO THE NEXT DAY CUZ UR LIFE IS HELL &SHIT AROUND U AINT MAKIN SENCE/ SPENDIN HOURS POURIN YOUR ALL INTO YOUR LYRICS BUT REACHIN TO COMPLACENCE/ WHILE JUST TRYIN TO STRETCH YOUR LIFE OUT HOPIN ITLL LAST/ U WANT THE REAL? NIGGA POUR ME ANOTHER GLASS/

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it sreal and there is emotion but the message isnt to clear other then that it is how

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uppin..much respect to all

emotional but a little shaky the flow is off and your vocab is lacking. i did hear the "realness of it" better structure would help. pretty good topic, there was a tupac feel to it which is always good. 6.5/10

/ OR JUST TRYIN TO BE SOMTIN IN LIFE, THAT PEOPLE ARE TELLLIN U ULL NEVER BE/ WHILE KEEPIN YOUR LUNGS FILLED WIT HAZE IN AN EVIROMENT CONSISTIN OF NOTIN BUT GANGSTAZ AND NEGATIVITY/ BUT SINCE I AINT REAL, U MUST NOT KNOW BOUT TRYIN TO GIVE UR ALL TO TO YOUR FAMILY, BUT THEIR NEVER CONTENT/ OR HAVIN YOUR BEST FRIENDS CALL U DURING THE PROCESS OF THEIR SUICIDAL ATTEMPT-with a little refining this could be a dope couple of bars its raw and powerful right now as it is