XL4Real Vs Shylock
 

10 lines max
no d/r
no crew
no fake ass
votes
must spit now, no dissapearin....

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checkin in........
so who spits first?

specific rules:

no d/r
no crew
no hate
votes

voting status:
first to 3 wins
otherwise first to 5 votes if both get a vote before one get 3 straight

10 lines max? (i thought it was 10 lines minimum?! ha ha!)

you spit 1st............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....im at work

i'm at work too! ha ha!

i've seen your battles that you've nominated, battle record's a lie!

you over-rate yourself, you need help, and i'm goin to

demonstrate it, you're so weak i could rip your whole body into

many peices, use your muscles for one of them breakable dog

leashes, real MCs tellin me what i should give you... what YOU

deserve, i asked for a HEAVY WEIGHT MC... not a HERB!:eek:

that's why you wanted me to post first, so you could come back

wit your little weak amerce, my verse could put your whole

reputation in a herse, you never wanted to see my real ill lyrical

curse, YOUR TURN! but how you suppose to get back at me wit

your brain has 5 seconds until these words sink in, and it

FRACTURES!

good verse man

Checkin in yo...............

I dont belive your a newb even though you spit like one,
and after checkin ya verse I know this battles over b4 its begun.

I clocked ya skills and they rusty like used time peices,
You have no iron in ya structures I can tell from the creases.

I saw you searching on the floor for ya brain you couldnt find,
You head flipped open and I saw it empty you musta lost ya mind.

I heard you were hungry so I mailed you a photo of ya last babes breast,
and you swollowed her up whole so you could say I fed you ya ex.
(mailed-fed ex)

Im splittin ya verse up and picking at it, you hear me moan like bitches,
But as you laughin at me ima knock you out leaving you in stiches. (Laughing-in stiches)

Here ya go sorry about the delay...............

uppin this shit guys drop ya links honest votes returned.......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................

Easy win for X...

I think the first guy had two words that rhyme in all of his first 4 lines.

After that, he came ok, but X brought everything to the table at once.

Good wordplay, tight flow, and good punches.

nice verse daw.. aright we uppin for votes now.. HONEST ONES! remember the voting rules.. no HATE, no CREW, and no D/R VOTES.. take it easy ladies and gents.. i'm outtie

Jup x ripped it.on every aspect other cat needs some elevation, x took this on flow , punches....nice battle Vote=Xl4real

Can't vote yet but vote = X

"I clocked ya skills and they rusty like used time peices,
You have no iron in ya structures I can tell from the creases."

That shit killed it, but good battle overall

yo shy you need to arrange you verse better, that shit rhymed good but if cats can't read it right they ain't gonna feel it

hit up my battle with bigdishiphop

sorry for the freepost but hit this up and ill vote on this one......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72171

damn people bein sleepin on this one

uppin this battle for honest votes........honest votes returned so drop ya links..................
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I know i cant vote but im guna give sum feed back

XFReal u gota cum up wit better punchlines, more complicatedya know cuz they too basic, nice flow tho, U won this man

The other kid was just wack, shit flow, no punches no nuthin, just ryhmin

yo For Real can u vote on this in return , thanks dawg

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73077

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73148
vote with a fair mind

yo if that un rhymin shit wasnt ther and some ill shit replaced it mabey you would of won but same here x got this