youngblood vs Atl-Killah
 

HERES THE RULES

u spit first
10-20 lines
no crew
no hate
no dick rydin votes
u got 15-20 minutes to spit after set up

check in.............and good luk

iight have have my spit in like 10-15 min

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I'm only battlin vet's so if any vet wants to battle PM me

U Ready 2 B Merked

ill put ur 'life in a broken engine' to leave ur 'fate-stalled' put u on the moon to see ur weight-fall/
leave u scraped-in-this-brawl cuz like swallowing pool tables all u did was ate-balls (eightballs)//
punches curl u up like positions in infancy cuz ill cut u off faster than chicks during pregnancy/
ur lifes a waste ur punches fail to make me react cuz they known for their fukk ups like the CIA agency//
Cyrogen ill let this text-tell as punches directly connect wit ur face like they were backed by nextel/
i juss reflect-shells im surprised u didnt 'freeze up' since i leave the booth in stasis to hand u an "L"//
ill leave doctors lookin at u stitchin-for-days cuz like barbars wit guns i juss keep 'itchin-ur-fade'/
like 'Holes in Calenders' ur punches are 'missin-da-daze' cuz like homos boxin u juss be 'flinchin-for-gays'//

~change my style~

This oldie's Style is Opposite like Switched-Caskets-Pinned and Fixed-Lactitives making Shit-Back-With-In with no reasin to Pass-the-5th To Be Relaxing-Bitch/
Even When Rich-Rappers-Present Him, This Fag's still Laughed-at-In-Bliss Along with a Style not Even Described With-Six-Adjectives//
Sayin he Made "Dope Rhymes", Obviously People didnt have a Clue-Of-Him-Fakin' Destroyin His "Youth-of-the-Nation'' with his Punches Stupid-and-Played-In/
Ripped in a "Computer,"Dissed-in-the-"Matrix",'Cause now Ive killed, One, Two-Bitches-in-the-Makin'//
Tell him to Change My Oil then Run Him over till he Bleeds-in-a-Funnel Decieve him so he has no Belief or Faith like Squeezed-in-a-Tunnel, leave him Beat-and-Then-Pumbled/
Heaved-and-Rumbled, young Visit's like Retarded kids with a Book Tryin to Read-but-just-Stumbled //

ur turn if u win 5-0 it'll be becuz of d/r's

Nice verse... good punches.... a few clever showcases of wordplay... gonna be hard to come back from that one... Good Luck to Youngblood.... im sure hes capable of doing it...

hopefully....

g'luc youngblood

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yo my bad i just got back from the store, i'll have my shit in like 15-20 minutes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

iight nigga

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JERKED my PEARL-OUT and made Atl Killah HURL-OUT "cookies" like GIRL-SCOUTS//
in the LEFT-LANE "gassed up" like METH-ANE? I'll make you WHIRL-OUT//
my rhymes are "tighter" than a VIRGINS-MUFF//
i got you makin an "anthem" cause you RYDIN-RUFF//
sick of voters sayin this guy "came harder", his oppenent is CLOSE-THOUGH//
it leaves me thinkin is this a battle or a script for a GAY-PORNO//
your lyrics show u ain't DEFINED-A-GENIOUS//
still "dick rydin?" i see more meat on that UNCERCUMSIZED-PENIS//
I'll CLAP-DIS-NIGGA, how ya gonna react when I SMACK-THA-TRIGGA//
c'mon u couldn't come wit a gun if ya ass was an ACTION-FIGURE//
he better GRASP-NOTES, couldn't find personals to hit with if he looked at PAST-POSTS//
blood comes ready to BLAST-THROATS "over shadowin" MC's ridin around in BLACK-CLOAKS//
if Killah had "rods with ballots strapped" to them he still couldn't get people to CAST-VOTES!!//
SPITTIN CLIPS straight "FINGER LICKIN" like colonel FIXEN some CHICKEN-AND-BISCUITS//
MERKIN-THIS-BITCH like DAVID BERKOWITZ......//
battlin me is like stress, cause im puttin SHIT-ON-YA-MIND//
only time u can lyrically rape me, is if u HIT-ME-FROM-BEHIND//
I'm NICE-WITH-PENS...DIVIDIN-YA-MEN....don't hide ya PAIN-LIKE-VICO-DINS(pills)//
im HYPE-WITHIN...i bet Killah won't ever BLAZE-THA-MIC-AGAIN!!!!

thats tight but why did u put capilization on every fuckin multie....lol

g'luc nigga

uppin 4 votes

This is a hard ass battle

im gonna have to vote 4 killah he has a nice flow...

both yall had a good use of multies...

i think vocab has to go to killah

vote=killah

both yall was ill this battle should go down in books

Ayo ATL...i REALLY liked da second part and i aint gonna hate on da first part...but it wuz all multi's and meta's and got boring after a while.... it lacked nice flow.... da second part wuz nice tho.... youngblood....overall i liked your verse a bit betta becuz u added a fair amount of multi's and meta's, nut u had nice flow... u flowed through lines, into da next line... great on dat... punches were pretty good but i liked atl's second part punches betta....
My Vote-youngblood wit betta flow....no hate tho...nice drop....

thanx 4 votin yall

and not sleepin

hope there ain't gonna be no d/r all b-cuz im a new-b here

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on the site i came from i'm 56-12

1-1

uppin 4 sum more votes

I gotta hand this one too killah that first part of the verse sucked but the second part killed it. Dpe battle but Killah edged it it with vocab. Neither of you had stand out punches. Work on those.


Vote=atl-killah

iight thanx 4 votin nigga

2-0

uppin 4 votes

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even tho i cant vote!! still think u both made a good effort if i could vote it would have 2 b atl killah! hes much betta!peace

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