To AlL You HaYnAs
 

To all you hynas...
To all you hynas who think that the gang life is all bad and tight, believe me its not. You may think that they got your back, that your vato is there for you when you need him. Thats a bunch of bull whoever told you that. Yea, you got a vato. A sorry excuse of one. I'm not tryin to diss on any of you, pero all they want is what is between a hynas legs. Yea they care for you. Up until they find a few hyna to fool around with. Yea your homies got your back. But if the other gang has a gun, they'll run the other way and forget you exist. Oh yea. Its tight almost being raped. Its a bunch of fun trying to stop your vato from beating you. Cause thats gang life esa. I'm not trying to put down all the vato gang members, cause i'll be da first to admit que they are not all like that. There are the few exceptions. But that is only like 2 out of 10. Think about it. 2 out of 10. I know i sound harsh when i say all dis. Pero I gots to. I've lived through all that shit. I've lived it. I've lived my vato beating me. I've lived through almost getting raped. I've lived through people trying to drug my drink. I've lived through all the gang shit. I'm a straight surena comin at'cha from califas. Take my word for it. But if you don't, you wanna live my life? go for it. It ain't no picnic esas. I don't want to see none of ya 6 feet under ground, cause thats all this gang life will bring. You might be next. So if you are in a gang, get out if you can. If you are not in a gang, aprovecha and get away from the influences. Do your familia a favor and don't get them involved. If you love your family, don't hurt them by joining a gang.

i know this aint a poem but its how i feel.usually wat u feel is poetry.it dont have to rhyme.~1~

Oh this is certainly poetry. Real deep emotional raw poetry. With a seriously deep message.

I think thats something that aint seen much often in poetry. I mean, everyone is trying to express themselves. I try and express myself, she trys to express herself. And it's all about ourselves, but not others. And at the end you tell others to do something, and you tell them not to join a gang.

And thats a good thing, because in expressing yourself you give a message to others. A message, that some people may honestly not realize.

And for that, I praise you.

~Shalom~

This was really filled wit emotion 4 me cuz at the end u tell us "if u wanna live my life go ahead."

i dont wanna live your life but i dont know how to get out of it.

i mean my vato always beats me and ive been raped plenty of tymes.

the only reason it happend is cuz ppl drugged ma drink tha first tyme and it was one of my vatos friends.the other tyme it was my vato.

anywayz really good heartfelt piece .it was not basic i mean most ppl think poetry has to rhyme but i dnt think so.

hope to see more of your pieces.overall i give it a 9/10!


KEEP UPPIN ~1~

well done...sounds like a great intro to a song or intro itself
touching on what youve been through and got past...

well done...if something not broke..dont fix it..
stick to this style because this is really you..

well done..please reply to me..la paz

raw emotion,nice piece,lots of emotion.