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Through The Clouds
Through The Clouds:
Through The Clouds, Throughout The Faithful Crowds, There Is A Silver Lining - With Heavenly Light ..... Blissfully Shining... Through The Mist, I See All The Chances I Missed... Each n’ Every Life Story, With A Surprising Twist... I Still Persist To Exist, Still Insist To Subsist Myself... Never Gonna be Another Rapper - Sittin’ On the Shelf... Never Gonna be Another Rapper - Who Hates Himself... I’ll Always Look To The Sky, And Ask “Where, When n’ Why”.... Even Though I Continuingly Speak - I Never Get A Reply... ‘Till The Day I Die, I’m Always Gonna Be - The Other Guy... Through The Clouds, Throughout The Faithful Crowds, There Is A Silver Lining - With Heavenly Light ..... Blissfully Shining... My Actions, I Still Regret, Still Gettin’ My Mic Wet... Breaking Out In A Sweat, Still In Lyrical Debt... I’m Like The Rapper - The Fame Choose To Forget... No Threats, Hopefully I’ll Live - To Be A Vet... Not Ready To Die Yet, Ready To Rep, With Sway n’ Tech... I Can Still Dream, Of Takin’ Rap To The Extreme.... Through The Clouds - Comes A Illuminating Beam... It Tells Me - Things Are Not What They Seem... I Got More Bruises - Than Players On A Football Team... But Mine Are Emotional - Filled With Unrealistic Dreams.. Man, I Always Thought - My Lyrics Ruled Supreme... Through The Clouds, Throughout The Faithful Crowds, There Is A Silver Lining - With Heavenly Light ..... Blissfully Shining... I Look At All The Unnecessary Suffering n’ Pain... Thinking Of The Real Meaning Behind My Name... Alithes Ennoia - The True Concept, 1000 yr Reign... But That’s How long It’ll Take, For Me To Find Fame... Vocab, Wordplay, Flow Like The Niagara Falls... But Still My Mind, Is Concealed Behind Concrete Walls... So Thick, My Mind’s Wondering Endless Dead-end Halls... Tryin’ To Find An Answer, And Incurable Cure... Tryin’ To Find Lyrics, That Are Poetically Pure... This Is Me, This Is The Life I Lead... My Only Aim - Is To Successfully Succeed... Through The Clouds, Throughout The Faithful Crowds, There Is A Silver Lining - With Heavenly Light ..... Blissfully Shining... |
yo that was a nice drop man...it was simple and to the point, but damn it flowed so fukin smoothly. Had some wordplay in there, not much, but it wasn't needed. The Vocab was pretty good, nothin' to simple, but nothin over the top. Liked this piece alot...8/10.
Fav Line was: Vocab, Wordplay, Flow Like The Niagara Falls... But Still My Mind, Is Concealed Behind Concrete Walls... check my drop out 'One Drink To Many' http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73202 |
Nice piece my man, internal rhyming kept the flow smooth, but you seemed to sacrifice content for flow, and lot of the internals were basic rhyming, id of prefered them to be multi's because then it would of been dope.
Didnt seem to have any particular topic as i read it, just a lot of random thoughts penned down and put together with that 'silver lining' hook. The emotion was there, but the imagery was vivid, nothing really 'stood out' to me as a quoteable line, but it wasnt a bad piece, i liked it and it made for an ok read. Props. Reply to mine: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72095 |
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u gunna hit mine up??
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GYO! that shit was LLOONNG... as hell daw! but it was tight! i felt yuh! aint d\r'n but yuh got skillz homie! i liked the multies you had up in it! it made it flow perfect! nice drop daw! hope tuh see anothuh heat from yuh deep.. take it easy MC.. i'm outtie!
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