jarrad vs deser_eagle
 

yo here da rules.

10 lines, five bars
no h/c/dr votes
no recyclin
no bitin
you spit first.
no beef

g'luck nigga

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72832

yo, can u vote on this battle plz.............................................

yo, check it.


yo, i read yo raps and I think that ur a slob,
U need to get yo bitch ass up and get a job.
I bet ur a homo, don't even have a lady,
Bitch u can't rap, u fake ass Slim Shady.
Give up rap, go listen to some rock,
I'm beg'n u dawg, pleeeese stop.
U can't rap, U ain't got no skills,
Try to battle me u gon get killed.
I don't want to see u used the word nigga no mo,
U ain't got rights u bitch ass hoe.
I hope u take heed and give rap up,
All I really wanted to say is U SUCK

just think, dat is da worst 1 i have writen yet??? you so i say g'luck nigga, may da best man win, catch ya

i like that.... that was tyte. i was feelin it... no we gotta see if otha peeps agree... peace...........................

"Karat"

yo dawg, you went ova ten lines

ya rhymes are ~sad~ like a retard wit ~downs syndrome~
bitches say its a ~syn-i-kill~. not physically, but lyrically, right 'fore you reach da top, ya ~pen-i-kill~(pinnacle...top of ya career). my flows are electrifyin like da chair, it'll ~shock-ya-fella~,
my guns'll ~pop-ya-fella~ like i assassinated that bitch ~roc-a-fella~. i'll ~take ya breath away~ like i cut outcha ~vocal chords~ wit my ~lyrical sword~.
workin out thinkin ya gon' get ~pumped up~, gotta gun that'll ~pump ya up~ wit lead. send six of em through ya head.


i know this is prolly wack but this first battle ever.