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without physical exertion../
words in scripture and verses
have the power to move destroy minds and mountains.. /
used as weapons to pierce hearts poundin/
or as blooming flowers to spread love around them../
all in all wordplay is a dangerous action../
grass and vile got fresh seeds lost in foul soil/
the tragic depression of self expressed turmoil/
the impact from hate slang can name/
even the strongest hard boiled vain gargoil/
action speaks louder than words true../
but i can swing and miss you../
on the other hand slander is like a heat seekin missile/
form of communication shaped into a lance/
to pierce your myocardial tissue../
i hear some things foul and inaudible/
make tears blur my visuals/
strange sights in semi blinded intervals/
pride and envious rituals../
every form of life can be expressed... spoken/
from dreams to findin ya love and gettin her open/
to blasphemous sentiments testin peoples faith and hope/
quote them.. words are deadly like cannons/
vulgar yet can be beautiful as natures plan with out man in../

Very eloquent verse you have there...
I felt at times you tried too hard with your vocabulary.
"Myocardial tissue", you could have just said heart and gotten a more impactful meaning.
There's a fine line between complexity and WTF?
But aside from that you had a very nice and powerful verse about our battles in here and how that stretches outside of rap and music cuz words hurt and heal everywhere.
7.5 possibly 8 out of 10.

Now you read mine...
Thank you...
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