my real feelin
 

it feels like no matter how hard i try/
its like i dry out and die in the battles/
every one it like they against 2hot2handle/
they i say i need to elevate/
yeah sure i do, but i try to create/
the work and im just sayin what i feel/
everything is so real/
i cant win a fuckin battle against someone/
they just laughin and makin fun/
of me sayin im wack/
sayin rhymes i lack/
and when i feel like i might win/
they just trash me and throw me in a bin/
that makes me grin and mad/
thinkin im real bad but i just feel like they just wanna go after me/ but exactly i aint that bad at rhymes/
i at least deserve some votes but they just keep votin for the opponent/
and hate my content when im lashin out/
tellin about how much they suck/
and then they say what the fuck was that shit/
no matter what they say im a never quit/

nice way to let out ya feelings/aggression..never give up..never quit..bla bla bla..but u definately need to elevate..this was wack in all ways besides let n out ya feelings..flow was simple..no multis..content lacked..definately need to work on ya complexity..ya structure needs work..dont break lines up..



like that..dont do that..dont break the line up just so it seems to rhyme..

u got a lot of elevate n to do..but if u really like rap n..etc..dont give up..not many ppl started out ill..majority of us had to elevate as we went..