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2hot2handle vs Fed Ex
i spit first
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I rip the mic outta your hand/8
Slammed it on the ground off of its stand/8 wires everywhere and pieces/8 im gonna bang all your nieces/8 Man lookin "cool wearin sports wear/7 Actin like he in cool gear/ im just speakin from my mind/7 Lyrically as defined/7 This kid is ridin like Elton John/9 He looks like he is a gay icon/9 this cat thinks hes an ill emcee/8 hearin people sayin really?/8 Man dogg you probably a rapist/9 Go to kobe actin innocent/9 Yo rhymes need some serious wack emergency/12 Cause i burn you so bad you are a third degree/12 Your earring is on your right/7 Man thats gay yo rhyme not tight/7 Stop trying to be some famous hollywood star/12 this is a rap game , you are not gonna go far/12 Yo rhymes are over par, you need to be strong/11 your rhymin is not going to be that long/11 This dogg thinks hes part of a crew/8 everything he say aint true/8 |
Nigga you cant handle this new comer, the name is Ex, I'll be haunting your dreams and thats only where you'll find sex/
My rhyme scheme for you to understand,never,its too complex, Man I'm basically already finished with this wack Emcee,NEXT!// I'm gonna destroy you nigga, especially with your weak ass verse,You'll be leavin this battle in a hearse/ Rhyming,is what you seriously need to rehearse,I'll leave you in a residents home,gettin your back scrubbed by an ugly nurse// You actually want to be the victim of my first battle? Whooping your ass from here to seattle/ You a farm boy, stick to rounding cattle,You afraid of me more than you are of a snake that rattles// HAHAHA!!! this dude...thinks hes cool wit crap rhymes like that, Its just rude/ when you saw my post after your callout, you knew you were screwed,the chances of you beatin me are 0, the same as your chances of seeing a girl nude// Dont stand a chance against me man,you should have taken longer to post your verse to devise a battle plan/ Your verse belongs in the garbage can,your now recieving your ass whooping, staright from this delivery van// You're really 2Ugly 2Look At, you obviously werent ready for combat/ Read my bars over and over, nigga you know you cant top that,To defend your self against me, you're gonna need ALOT more than a safety hat!!// vote now people. |
up up uppiinn........................................... ...........................^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^...........................
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Fed Ex totally outclassed this otha kid...u got some skillz. But anyway herz tha breakdown:
Fed Ex's Best: ------------------ Nigga you cant handle this new comer, the name is Ex, I'll be haunting your dreams and thats only where you'll find sex/ My rhyme scheme for you to understand,never,its too complex, Man I'm basically already finished with this wack Emcee,NEXT!// ------------------------------------------------------------------- Tite. 2Hot2Handle's Best: ------------------------- wires everywhere and pieces/8 im gonna bang all your nieces/8 ---------------------------------------- This wasn't tha' great. U could have used words like "thesis", expand yo vocab. Tha Breakdown: --------------------- Punches: Fed Ex Flow: Fed Ex Ryhme scheme: Fed Ex Most Laughs: Fed Ex Vocab: Fed Ex Structure: Fed Ex Complexity: Fed Ex Overall: Fed Ex I would poll vote, but I can' dawgz. Sry...hit these battles up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73026 ^^^This was an easy battle^^^^ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73022 ^^^^^^No Show^^^^^^^^^^ Thx dawgz. |
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^^^^^^Word. Dis dawg broke down everythin'.....I agree wit him toatally. He's a herb, but he knows wat da fuck he's talkin' 'bout. Vote=Fed Ex |
yo E-lyrical, dont I need a vote in the poll?? I donno, i'm new here, imressed arent ya peoples?, BTW how can u change ur name???
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i had the flow it all had the same equal syllables......................................... .................................................. ...................
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UPIn for votes people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
................ doont matta bout syllables, this aint poetry, jus read it aloud and see if it flows, your line's are too short too. |
2hot weak ass shit dawg i am a newbie and can whoop ya ass i dare you to challenge me please do it so i can rip you fed ex nice dawg that was tight keep it up yo 2hot you will get ripped if you come at me so do it if you wanna go 0-5 after fed ex wins this
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vote on this people, I wanna actually get my first battle finished!!!..................vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... .........
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he said everything right... couldnt have broke it down nebetter.... hit this up http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD |
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