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pot1ent 08-16-03 05:56 PM

Im-aged
 
Add-a-lesson to the eqautions of life arrange ciphe so it's as complex as word-perfects mind,(labyrinth)
Find nothin but dead-ends never relightin the dubs seems like i punch drunk with rhymes/
No accuracy with the brain shutdown immaculatly lame the way texts layed down for a verse,
4/10 for a verse the way i'm only a third of a way to bein a bird i'm waitin...but i get served/
Organic so i must be a herb i'm the hardest rock like granite now watch a metamorphis,
Dorment like doors weren't meant to be opened and hopin that a genie will gimme a wish/
Be in bliss like J-LO and Ben cuz i'm strippin tot he bare essentails so no false-images,
Can manage this, bein sore so i'll take some canabis and vibe the lyrics hes singin/
Follow Avalons motto keep practicin like theres no tommorow and end up dope like him,
I keep spittin and always look at the piece instead of the whole-pie...its confusin/
Illusions always gettin in the way concludin what i say isn't hard to over come...it's pussy,
Keep downin my self so im level with wee-man then anythin else a bonus to this mc/

Some thoughts, some issues that needin droppin...oNe

Bash 08-17-03 01:34 AM

LoL...I shuted you up in that battle we had..........Anyways nice piece........But ur bars were too long...........U need too shortened it..........The tittle was played.......Well Keep elevating...

BFire 08-17-03 02:29 AM

holy fuck..ive never seen anyone with such long bars..imagine a drumline in ur head while ur writiing it should help.


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