Life is Over
 

Speakin from a different perspective
Trying to live life, once was the objective
But I was...too hardheaded to accept it
It accepted me though, as in itself is dyslexic
through pain and feeling neglected
Where a Painful law, prevents the best from being respected
Takes shape of its form, in its power control
Creatin memory's remembered by souls
My mind has split in Two, showin perspectives of reality
In itself it's like Skitzophrenic personalities
The life that we lead, is nothing that we recieve
Because in life we have goals, but when dead:no goals to achieve
We worked so hard in life, just to survive
but a wise man knows, its useless, because we all die
When there's nothin to enjoy, when nothing is not there
But likeliness to all poor folks who despair
losing life to the strife in the world to they gone
We all die, so we could relate to words in this song

Nice short open mic..........Nice concept and all.......It should have been longer though..

i was gonna make it longer, but all the big words in their made me run outta fuel.Nonetheless

UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can relate....i thot u should have kept on rippin tho i wantd more but u got da job done. nice flow dowg!

thank you for the comments, and UP!

liked tha piece but like tha others i wanted more dawg,but it was tight.

Peace

I'll make a longer open mic when i drop again.