T-Square vs. PleDge
 

Check In: Tuesday.

Verses: Thursday.

Alright, The Rules...

16-48 Line Limit...

No Bullshit...

Topic: Fearful Realization

checkin in to this, well I already have a vurse to go off for this................................
100!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

in..................good topic can work with this one atleast........................................... ...........

time fly by yo face before you kno it its gone
like an angel flying hig above you, nighting gales fatal last song
like medusa your thoughts can be frozen and set in stone with one glance
you can deal with the present and the future, but cant over come your past
when you look in the mirror your smiles reflected by the pane
but sometimes that gilletring face can be too unrealistic and too sane
glazed look in your eyes and overcome with confusion
your brain locks and your grip on life is an illusion
when people tell you the truth you just listen and smile
thought its of little importance but dont see the seriousness in their eyes
they try to save you from falling but you push them away
they try to tell you to slow down but you pick up the pace
youd sell your soul for completion chilling times you go thru all for one kiss
when all you need its to look back at your life and remember all the good times you have missed
Burdens and unfinished business hang over you head
rather than trying to solve it you let the load get heavier instead
try running from your problems but they just follow
learning you cant run away from yourself is a hard thing to swallow
it chokes you, the thought that your not as perfect as you thought
apart from all the times you TRIED so hard, too hard, those times you fought
just to end up back where you stand right now with no way out your trapped
eternally in your own debt dont try escaping just watch your world collapse
rather progress backwards than plannig your way forwards where will you end?
when will you realise tht you cant make it on your own, you need a friend
someone who will let you cry on their shoulder
someone who will help you when your down
someone who will stick around when you grow older
someone who will make you smile instead of frown
You are only young and yet to learnthe true meaning of your life
instead of listening to the truth youd rather fill your mind up with lies
so tranfixed on your sucesison you have forgotten who you are
but if you dont start to remmeber then how can you expect yourself to go far
You couldnt could you? it was too much for you to take in
So now your way out is to try to commit the worlds biggest sin
you stand there shaking whilst your eyes closed like they have been all these years
so stone cold that when you weep you cry solid ice tears
they cut into your soul and clip your agels wing you need
but as you step forward of the building your body begins to pick up speed
as you tumble over your own self your realisation comes to mind
and when your ten foot from the bottom purity is what you find
you understand all of lifes meanings and you pray that youll take flight
but you are too late now to change your direction, so you fall into the night
when you first looked into the mirror years ago you seen a beatuful creation
but now your hanging on to dear life but thats your fateful and fearful realisation
you lost love so early to early learned to hate
and now you pay the price of ignorance and in your present state
in tombed in your own pity you never will re awake

okay i went over the limit.....achwell i dont care a couldnt shorten it..........................100

Its six o'clock in the morning and I sit alone in dispair/
Mentaly prepare to face life and the way its not fair/
Choices and lifestyle changes forever altering mindsets/
Not knowing if its time yet till death do us part is jus a bet/
But I already have the ring but I'm still young doing my thing/
Whatever it is I stay undecided and my souls still left divided/
The bumps got me outridden forgettin how hard the ride ends/
And your left confused when you've payed your dues but the check bounces/
A brother a mother and a Lover--/
make it up, the I love you's you hear become so amounted there countless/

So its time to wake her up from sleeping and expose the thoughts i think deeply/
"Oh sweetie" I say as I kiss her morning breathed lips that still taste sweet to me/
As her eye opens I get down on one knee all around me I jus feel time freeze/
"From being a G to falling in L-O-V-E with you is all Ive wanted to be, will you marry me"/
And befor she answers you hear a knock at the door, so startled the ring falls to the floor/
Then your stomach just turned poor, felling like it did the night befor/
When the passageway opens you hear screams of fear and worry/
"Man your little brother fucked with the wrong people jus hurry"/
Go kiss my woman goodbye take a look into her eyes/
And udder "I love you, please think about it, I'll see you for dinner at five"/
"I love you" its meaning seems to have ironic outcomes/
But you follow your brothers friend through the ghetto slums/
Come up to a home, that looks like bob vila had a bad day/
And see six thugs jus starin at you the wrong way/
then the news seems shocking,"Yo bro owes us a lot'/
He pulled down a snitch that should have got shot'/
Now you have two choices""Let me have it"/
'Either he dies or you pull the drive by with this automatic'/
Ride off to do this quick theres no reason to make this hard/
Pulled around this block and went head on into a car/
It happened to be the love of my eternal searching/
And she died instantly not even a second of hurting/
That could be less than what I got/
When I lost my mind by my own hand and the Shot/

The end/

good drops from both

T- had a better perspective the way his story was told made it slghtly more interesting
was't really outstanding....didnt have enough imagery and word play imo

Pledge..u surprised me with a solid verse here (lentgh meant i was getting a bit bored halfway thru)
but what won it was your imagery and u seemed to have spent alot of effort on it and also some nice wordplay

'when you look in the mirror your smiles reflected by the pane '

'so stone cold that when you weep you cry solid ice tears
they cut into your soul and clip your agels wing you need

thanks a kno it lost interest in te middle of it i couldnt help it thougyh...i need help onshortening the verse lol

Vote Pledge, I Mean His Whole First Half Was Nice And Flowed Too, T Had A Descent Verse And Stayed On Point But Didnt Have My Attention As Much As P's. Nice Drops

lol ama gurl!!!!!! vote on poll ????? please i need wins on ma rec!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its Deadline Time, Whoever Has More Votes At This Time Will Be
Declared The Winner.. But i Will Not Edit The Poll To Fuck Up
Battle Records...

So Next Week Pledge Will Be (1-0)
And T-Square Will Be In At (0-1)

Good Luck In Weeks To Come..