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A2Z Vs. Evolve
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Verses: Thursday. Alright, The Rules... 16-48 Line Limit... No Bullshit... Topic: Behind Closed Doors |
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Busy as fuck at work... im not gonna be able to post till tommorow morning... PM'd Sureal about it... its up to him
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An Oak Portal To The AfterLife...Through The Door To All My Mind
A Padlock Hiding Whats To Contain...Blackened Walls Inside With A Flash I Am Transported...To The Days Of My Youth And To The Days Of My Mother...Yearning For The Truth Wondering If I Was Really Useful...Or Using Me To See If I Was Her Pot Of Gold...How Much Cash Was Inside Of Me How We Were Running Low On Cash...A Checks All I Could Be And I Was In The Possession Of Strangers...Intent On Using Me For There Own Twisted Reasons...But Unbeknowst To He That I Wasnt Right In The Head...Called A Crack Baby Not Mentally All There But No One Knows...I Usually Look Fine But When My Mom Gave Me Up To Them...It Appeared In Me Eyes The Hotel Room Was Dingy...Just Like Ever Other Time No One Could Afford Luxury...On Boy They Spent Every Dime Most Were Consitent Customers...Those Who Liked To Sodomize All Changed The Day...That I Decided I Would Make HIm Die He Brought Me Inside The Room...And Asked How I Was That Day He Was Mocking Me I Could Tell...I Begged Him To Go Away But He Would Not, He Insisted He Paid...He Would Get His Way And That Was When My Life Was Ruined...Everything Changed He Dropped His Pants, He Smiled Wide...He Behind To Force Me Down No Way That I Could Ever Escape...I Began To Look Around For Anything That May Help Me...But Not A Thing Can Be Found Despersately I Spied A Letter Opener...A Dull Yet Affective Blade And He Began To Strip Me Down...I Began To Creep That Way A Raging Red Not Pupils There...Veins Bulged Far Too Wide He Slides Inside Of Me, I Begin To Cry...I Slowly Grab The Knife And Allow Him To Continue...I Would Soon Control His Life He Pulls Out After An Hour...I Was Still There For The Night But When Turned His Back To Clean...I Lunged At Him With The Knife The Blade Bit Into His Yielding Flesh...He Gave A Feeble Cry His Eyes Glazed Quickly...He Knew He Would Not Live Through The Night Blood Came OUt Very Quickly...A Thick, Scarlet, Dripping Coat With His Last Energy He Spun Aroud...And Grabbed Me By The Throat I Began To Stab Him Again And Again....He Would Not Let Go Slowly He Began To Stop...His Final Life Had Now Been Drained And That Is Where I Lef Him...Laying In The Hotel Slain And Now I Sit Here In These Padded Walls...Strikingly White Rooms And Now I Spend The Rest Of My Life...In The Nevada Mental Institute |
my mind is locked & i can't seem to find the key
but it's a waste of time, cause im just a waste of me i hate to be who you see, cause you see.. its fake basically im mistakenly taken for a composed individual who's cool on the out side, but knows insides' a different view i have no clue.. what i want to do or who i am got alot of issues.. but of course, you dont give a damn & the truth is.. neither do i sometimes i do want to cry, i dont... i hold it all inside when it comes to that time, pride helps me to stay cool & the tears of riddicule gather to form a Kiddie pool leaving my eyes swiming behind lids of a pittied Fool but its silly to... Kid myself into thinking im ok cause it feels like im KO'd every fucking day there's no ducking the next round.. im contracted to stay signed by way of heartache & pain.. but hey as long as everyone can't read my bluff & the hand i was dealt is safe.. poker face is just to tough even though i feel like folding & giving it up i can't i won't be provoked by disgust have to trust in my acting ability.. the crowd wants more "im Happy to be alive".. thats what the script calls for if the world is a stage.. i guess im performing on yours Thank You For Your Applause.. This Has Been Anothr Production Of "When Im Not Behind Closed Doors" |
If someone dont vote very soon... im gonna ... im gonna....
im gonna ..... just wait longer .. i guess.. HURRRYYYYYYY |
i'll be right back after these messages to vote........
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dam both killed this topic
liked both verses alot think evolves had a bit more complexity to it flow was good from both evolve dope....very original...well told and i like the way it unravelled all the way to the end kinda shit...flow was good toothough some folks may not get it a2z took a more visioned path...but had emotional side to it and slightly deeper than E's....very well told though and a nice twist at the end...also the story was like a visual as well cos i could imagine it all happening very close..fuck!...eeny meeny miney mo....nah vote A2Z |
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Vote A2Z . Evolve, Your Length Was Your Death
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Its Deadline Time, Whoever Has More Votes At This Time Will Be
Declared The Winner.. But i Will Not Edit The Poll To Fuck Up Battle Records... Therefore Evolve Will Be (0-1) Next Week And A2Z The 14 Year Old Will Be (1-0) ;) Good Luck In Weeks To Come... |
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