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13th Disciple 08-17-03 04:15 PM

13th vs Blueprint (pinkslips)
 
this kid just runs his mouth too much....now its time for slips....

Rulez: 10-20linez max....You drop first.....I don't need to see ur
verse to slip u......no dick riding....if any is sensed...vote will be
deleted.......since u said.....

sam blueprint: none of that key style shit niether
sam blueprint: give me a chance to prove myself

u got until tomorrow night to post ur verse.....thats the rulez..g/l

BluePriNT 08-17-03 04:33 PM

no doubt.


seen as ur an idiot.

i'll post suttin up 2moro............................................. ......................

13th Disciple 08-18-03 06:24 PM

this kid got until tonight to drop....he checked in with the rulez...
so either way.....he ....will......be..........BANNED!...lol.....uppin. .....1

BluePriNT 08-18-03 09:02 PM

I heard that this bitch, was researchin n shit, that’s faggot.. and I hope ur learnin from this, leave u burned to a crisp, when I serve u so quick, in return for those scripts, u just earned u a slip. Fuck ya regime, you n ya played scemes, couldn’t see mine in day dreams, fuck golden drops – I lay geese!, gather ya gay peeps, n take seat

I’ll stop when 13th is clowned, treat u like ya pops n beat u down!!
Raped at eight? Haha.. done said it.. a pin drop will leave a sound
I leave his ‘net’ rec’, flopped like a single arm bench press, catch wreck
When I eat this herb up and leave the battle with fresh breath
Ur lil bout-rhymes even get outshined, by your oily skin,
my verse is Clearasil – clearer still, ya rode and I aint joinin in
that’s what this about.. ur overrated and ur ‘throne’ is tastless
I aint known to hate kid, but u blow… lets face it, ur home?I ate it
Im the grusomest savage, Ur dick consumes all the wack kids
But the truth is ur average, yo Av. Why you In a crew full of faggots?
Ima stop ya ‘streak’ faster than fat hunny’s who strippin.. when I lunge at ya writtens
Must have a q_erty, cus u always got ‘W’s missin, haha.. son I aint kiddin
He’s nice? Haha. He lost twenty three times, please just stop it man
I abolish plans, Cus for real.. ur ‘type’ be more simple than comic sans
u go from vet to light soldier, leave flattend with the chip from right sholder
watch the whole site fold up, 13th?... so basically that’s ‘week’, twice over!!

13th Disciple 08-18-03 09:26 PM

sam blueprint: u wrote ya verse
cshep79: no....i keystyle
sam blueprint: do that now
sam blueprint: im done basically
cshep79: u ready to drop then?
sam blueprint: yea nearly
sam blueprint: like 8 line left, wont be long
cshep79: aiight
cshep79: got enough ink in ur pen to finish it?
sam blueprint: lol


let me introduce samuel blueprint to u....aka...sir mathematics
from www.rapsearch.com. this cat been talkin shit to me for the
longest.....he doesn't know apparently...how shit gets done in
RB....let me show this cat how its done......oh....i don't have
respect for prewriters.....



yo.....yo......come on ...come on....yo.....yo...


hatin on disciple?...now comes the consequences & repocussions..
notice when RB talks about pussies...u get thrown in discussion?..
0-0?, damn, 13th leavin u without a chance to battle in tournies..
cuz like disciple was tossin blunts...u catchin an L in this journey!..
feel bad for beatin this jerrys kid...cuz at times i do fund-a-mental.
but kid, u couldn't beat my ass hittin my donkey wit instrumentals.
...i'm 'too ill to fuck wit' so u might wanna get some protection.....
a search team 'Alldig' for 'blueprints' when i send the 'C-section'..
like crosseyed soccer players...u keepin urself far from ur goals...
defeatin 13th?!..God forgive me...slappin females isn't my morals..
tried to decipher ur punches....better chance in biblical scribes....
but i throw punches that leave bones in ur jaw like african tribes..
u been leavin ur two cents...its time for 13th to balance ur budget
'Blueprint?!'..even in school that was just anotha confusin subject
who'd think i'd battle this newb?...well herbert this battle is mine..
kid ur an asshole...wherever males go, ur dick isn't far from behind
..faggot ur earning this loss.....like handicap midgets in the NBA....
don't have a clue about ur gender...but word is ya 'type' gay....
if this is the Ultimate FIght...dawg, i'm commin like gracie, hoyce..
& leave ur presence on this site fadin quicker than Mary J's voice!.


woot woot!.....ghost

Mortality 08-18-03 09:38 PM

GOD MOTHA FUCKIN DAMN
SHIT WAS ILL AS FUCK
PROPS TO YA BOTH

Best Lines

BluePrint
I heard that this bitch, was researchin n shit, that’s faggot.. and I hope ur learnin from this, leave u burned to a crisp, when I serve u so quick, in return for those scripts, u just earned u a slip. Fuck ya regime, you n ya played scemes, couldn’t see mine in day dreams, fuck golden drops – I lay geese!, gather ya gay peeps, n take seat
I’ll stop when 13th is clowned, treat u like ya pops n beat u down!!
Raped at eight? Haha.. done said it.. a pin drop will leave a sound
I leave his ‘net’ rec’, flopped like a single arm bench press, catch wreck
When I eat this herb up and leave the battle with fresh breath
He’s nice? Haha. He lost twenty three times, please just stop it man
I abolish plans, Cus for real.. ur ‘type’ be more simple than comic sans

Nice Shit

13th Disciple:
hatin on disciple?...now comes the consequences & repocussions..
notice when RB talks about pussies...u get thrown in discussion?..
0-0?, damn, 13th leavin u without a chance to battle in tournies..
cuz like disciple was tossin blunts...u catchin an L in this journey!..
like crosseyed soccer players...u keepin urself far from ur goals...
defeatin 13th?!..God forgive me...slappin females isn't my morals..
u been leavin ur two cents...its time for 13th to balance ur budget
'Blueprint?!'..even in school that was just anotha confusin subject
who'd think i'd battle this newb?...well herbert this battle is mine..
kid ur an asshole...wherever males go, ur dick isn't far from behind
..faggot ur earning this loss.....like handicap midgets in the NBA....
don't have a clue about ur gender...but word is ya 'type' gay....
if this is the Ultimate FIght...dawg, i'm commin like gracie, hoyce..
& leave ur presence on this site fadin quicker than Mary J's voice!.
ILL AS FUCK

Punches=Tie
Wordplay=13th
Flow=Tie(sorta on the 13th side)
Multies-Bluepirint
Disses-Close
Structure=13th

Overall vote=13th disciple

BluePriNT 08-18-03 09:53 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Mortality
Flow=Tie(sorta on the 13th side)
Multies-13th

u show me some multies in his verse and i wont not count ur vote as dickriding

13th Disciple 08-18-03 09:57 PM

blueprint....don't start ur crying shit......go back to rap search wit
that shit.......this vote counts....he explained it well.......stop
hatin cuz he didn't vote for u......damn.....

Mortality 08-18-03 09:57 PM

my bad
neither of you really had multies
so i took that vote for 13th out and made it none
i had to re-read the verses
i thought he had alot of multies
but i was mistake

Mentally Kursed 08-18-03 09:57 PM

i didnt see any multies but cot damn dis was hott as hell 13th u had some ill ass punches and so did u blueprint but since i cant vote i wont say anything else me personally i thought this battle would be a 1 sided battle cus blueprint was tellin me some ill shit but damn this shit was close i wonder wha the outcome would look like sorry fo the freepost jus givin my opinion im out holla

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BluePriNT 08-18-03 10:13 PM

no multies? omg

do i really need to put dashes in.

and how the fuck was it explained well? @ 13th.

he took some verse and said "i liked this". then he broke it down and said u had better multies when u had noe and i had loads.


0-0.


shut up

Mortality 08-18-03 10:52 PM

^^Quit Bitchin Damn
Look At My Post I Changed It
Read BITCH
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...OpeY... 08-19-03 12:38 AM

Ok time to break this battle down for the bitchin homo...

BluePriNT

I’ll stop when 13th is clowned, treat u like ya pops n beat u down!!
Raped at eight? Haha.. done said it.. a pin drop will leave a sound
^^^mediocre opener^^^

I leave his ‘net’ rec’, flopped like a single arm bench press, catch wreck
When I eat this herb up and leave the battle with fresh breath
^^^that was pretty hot^^^

Ur lil bout-rhymes even get outshined, by your oily skin,
my verse is Clearasil – clearer still, ya rode and I aint joinin in
^^^huh?^^^

that’s what this about.. ur overrated and ur ‘throne’ is tastless
I aint known to hate kid, but u blow… lets face it, ur home?I ate it
^^^tastless wus decent but second line was dumb^^^

Im the grusomest savage, Ur dick consumes all the wack kids
But the truth is ur average, yo Av. Why you In a crew full of faggots?
^^^nice personal^^^

Ima stop ya ‘streak’ faster than fat hunny’s who strippin.. when I lunge at ya writtens
Must have a q_erty, cus u always got ‘W’s missin, haha.. son I aint kiddin
^^^100% gay^^^

He’s nice? Haha. He lost twenty three times, please just stop it man
I abolish plans, Cus for real.. ur ‘type’ be more simple than comic sans
^^^again huh?^^^

u go from vet to light soldier, leave flattend with the chip from right sholder
watch the whole site fold up, 13th?... so basically that’s ‘week’, twice over!!
^^^pretty good finisher^^^

you had more bad lines than good. u had 2 really good punches. a couple average lines, and the rest wasn't that good. you had good flow and some multis, but your multies were like 3 syllables. Your vocabulary was very basic with little to no good word play. you also lacked a lot of creativity.


13th Disciple

hatin on disciple?...now comes the consequences & repocussions..
notice when RB talks about pussies...u get thrown in discussion?..
^^^decent opener. good use of vocab^^^

0-0?, damn, 13th leavin u without a chance to battle in tournies..
cuz like disciple was tossin blunts...u catchin an L in this journey!..
^^^creative punch. pretty good but "journey" was kinda corny^^^

feel bad for beatin this jerrys kid...cuz at times i do fund-a-mental.
but kid, u couldn't beat my ass hittin my donkey wit instrumentals.
^^^jerrys kid line was pretty dope^^^

...i'm 'too ill to fuck wit' so u might wanna get some protection.....
a search team 'Alldig' for 'blueprints' when i send the 'C-section'..
^^^usin the names was creative as shit lol nice^^^

like crosseyed soccer players...u keepin urself far from ur goals...
defeatin 13th?!..God forgive me...slappin females isn't my morals..
^^^decent punch right there^^^

tried to decipher ur punches....better chance in biblical scribes....
but i throw punches that leave bones in ur jaw like african tribes..
^^^lol that made me laugh a lil^^^

u been leavin ur two cents...its time for 13th to balance ur budget
'Blueprint?!'..even in school that was just anotha confusin subject
^^^damn, good name flip. that was pretty hard^^^

who'd think i'd battle this newb?...well herbert this battle is mine..
kid ur an asshole...wherever males go, ur dick isn't far from behind
^^^thats filler and you know it!^^^

..faggot ur earning this loss.....like handicap midgets in the NBA....
don't have a clue about ur gender...but word is ya 'type' gay....
^^^that was infact 'gay'^^^

if this is the Ultimate FIght...dawg, i'm commin like gracie, hoyce..
& leave ur presence on this site fadin quicker than Mary J's voice!.
^^^really dope finisher. again creative^^^

you had way more good lines than bad. you only fell off twice near the end with some filler. you also had good flow but really no multis. Your vocabulary was decent, and you had some pretty good wordplay. you had a lot of creative shit. your verse was very consistent

I give this battle to 13th with better punches, vocab, creativity, and consistency. Blueprint's verse wasn't wack, but it lacked a lot of key elemnts that make a good battle verse. Props to both.

Vote=13th Disciple

13th Disciple 08-19-03 06:05 PM

up...up....uppin.............................i'm tired of these 100 characters
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X Ecution 08-19-03 06:17 PM

great battle..........13 u handled ur buisness and it proved to be enough to rip this kid.....blueprint...for a newbie to this site u did better than most but still u talked shyt bout the wrong vet...

best lines by 13 -

tried to decipher ur punches....better chance in biblical scribes....
but i throw punches that leave bones in ur jaw like african tribes..

u been leavin ur two cents...its time for 13th to balance ur budget
'Blueprint?!'..even in school that was just anotha confusin subject
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best lines by blueprint-

I leave his ‘net’ rec’, flopped like a single arm bench press, catch wreck
When I eat this herb up and leave the battle with fresh breath
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vote- 13th.......1

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