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Aprentice² 08-17-03 09:36 PM

Aprentice Verse Shady
 
iight dogg u go first 10 lines
no dr
no hate feed if u want holla by 2nite like 11

Aprentice² 08-17-03 09:50 PM

check in homie
and hit up a vote on my nitrification battle so i can get it over wit
iight..........................................

ShadySoldier 08-17-03 10:27 PM

You were given your chance and you blew it real quick, sounds like I'm talkin' 'bout what you do to a dick/1
I'd like to help you out but I aint down with you, your rhymes couldn't hold my attention if they were covered in glue/2
You'll never be nothin' in this rap game, nobody's listenin' to your beg for fame/3
In the end you're gonna choke, and in your own tears your soul will soak/4
I aint worried about what you're gonna spit, because I know you're skills-they're illeterate/5
Come on now dogg you're skill-less like a pop star, my rhymes out-weigh your's by far/6
You gotta be dreamin' if you think you're ill, you should wear a shirt that says "I Need Skill"/7
You and your style has totally sank, I would still beat you if I left my post blank/8
I already won by now for sure, I'm like a disease without a cure/9
Sorry dawg it needed to be said, you just flat-lined you're officially dead/10

Token 08-17-03 10:43 PM

recycler ^^^

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73856
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Aprentice² 08-17-03 10:49 PM

Yo Yo
i took your resilyency and coiled it up in one being/
this supreme being, being me/
beaten me is an irratical skeme/
my raps can bruise/
fuck black and blue, i leave u black and purple/
this battle lasted 30 seconds like a fucken commercial/
thats the time it took to read my lines/
your eminem style is not disguised/
its despised, so go cancauct and feed/
ill be here deviously, waiten to taste u bleed/


first blood drawn. hit me bak homie

Aprentice² 08-17-03 10:51 PM

hahaha i shouldnt have used that supreme being damn that was wack but come on yall uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Sicc Sylabilz 08-17-03 10:58 PM

That's an automatic win. to aprenticekid15. For recycling isn't it.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Aprentice² 08-17-03 11:07 PM

o i thought u ment cuz i beat him but w/e if u can vote hit my shit up if u cant gimme some feedback on what i should improve on.....................UPPINNNNNNNN

ShadySoldier 08-18-03 01:35 AM

Fuck y'all for thinkin I'm recyclin my shit! I already made it clear that I never meant to post my rhyme again Sicc Sylabilz! He's just being a bitch about it!

Aprentice² 08-18-03 06:47 PM

Whateva homie you dropped lets just get some votes goin on up in here.............................UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNN

GChand 08-18-03 09:01 PM

i was feelin' soldier's more... better wordplay & punches...
vote-shadysoldier

hit this up.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74067

Doctor_J 08-18-03 09:13 PM

ak15 lol the otha nigga...eminem wannabe recycled thats a no-no

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kid got dis

ShadySoldier 08-18-03 10:58 PM

I DIDNT FUCKIN RECYCLE I WROTE THIS SHIT TO APPRENTICE KID FIRST. IT WAS A FUCKIN MISTAKE AND I ADMIT IT!

Aprentice² 08-19-03 09:05 PM

Uppinnnni killed this kid so vote on it iight. Dont Sleep dogs!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNN

Aprentice² 08-20-03 06:58 PM

o i thought u ment cuz i beat him but w/e if u can vote hit my shit up if u cant gimme some feedback on what i should improve on.....................UPPINNNNNNNN


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