*Apokalyptic Kiss*
 

I walk along the shorez of mutant riverz flowing red
Nostradamus knew his shit ~ he said: “We’d wish we all were dead”
As famines increase da hatin’ ~ Man becomes a MAN~EATER
Wit cannibalistic tendencies ~ I be packin’ my lazer heater
I’ll zapdatass real fast ~ Right between the 3rd & 4th eye
Cuz I ain’t playin’ with dem’ freaks ~ And sho' az hell ain’t ready 2 die!
The sun bleedz profuse az I listen 2 tremblin’ earthquakes cry
Oceans & rivers suffocate ~ Tornado windz pick up & fly
The sky breathes plagues & disease
And frees the weak from dreaded reality
But I float above the fatality ~ A “~God” of iLL lethality
My mortality speaks of centuries of death & destruction
Scopin' science from Tyrannosaurus Rex 2 alien abduction
I flip flowz from my fortress using tortuous poetic cannons
Az heat from my essence ignites the presence of landminez fanning
I glaze the sky az I blaze the eye of the storm
Apokalyptic disasterz in my hood are just the norm
Most headz respect the effect as I lyrically wreck the stratosphere
Usin’ a fusion of poetics 2 rip and infect the atmosphere
Telepathically I insert probes of strobes between the earlobes
So mentally U understand my plan as I turn wack heads 2 sand
And twirl the world in my hands/Chillin’ in the cut above da Badlandz
Banding with lyrical sorcererz ~ Flowing oceanic reprimandz
I stand~Squeezing breath out defeat with metaphysical pressure
I stand ~ The Lyrical God ~ MiC sYcKlE the Poetic Blesser

Re: *Apokalyptic Kiss*
 

^^that was nice lol

this was a decent drop, not great, not bad, but good enough that i read the whole thing through and didn't regret it,

but i do feel you could have done a lot better with it, very interesting topic, but for some reason it just didn't seem to come off as strong as i feel that a topic like that should, thats just my opinion 7/10

Yeah i agree

just a quick lil peice sort of poetry style

But hey i thought it was OK

it was better then ok, just wasn't great lol, i might have stuck on the negatives of it more then i meant to,

like i said, it was good enough to read the whole thing through,
which is a decent compliment from me, i got no patience whatsoever lol