Keystyle!!!Read and Rate
 

Ayo...forgot to remember,but its not-to-forget/
'lock jaw' on emcees like 'rocs-n-pits'/
not to be able to knock-my-hit,i will 'cut' yo verse in a battle
like i 'chopped-yo-spit'/
i see 'pussies wanna jump' like u was gonna 'hop-yo-bitch'/
fuck 'keys' i 'chat-wit-heat',im gone chase ya wit my gun the day
u forgot to pack-ya-sneaks/
mad cause i jacked-yo-beatz,niggas cant doze
off i will smack-yo-sleep/
blaze my verse and you came back-wit-weak,niggas think they KOed me
fuck ill come back-and-cheat/
niggas wanna 'hit kicks' i make ya slap-yo-feet/
nap-was-deep,afta i put my gun to the left-of ya-brain/
death-must've-came,like my vocab took a rain-break/
i kill the paper then rip ya up on the same-date/
flick my lighter till my flames-awake,yo raps is
like 'black jokes',lame-n-fake/

Ayo...eterprise of the intermission,rerise the
lil part u missin/
i make ya dodge me like that dude i was dissin/
fuck battlin im gone stick-to-prees/(prees=writtens)
my punches come harder,so how lil boys gone hit-to-dees/
i need a 'verse' for this guy,so im bout to 'rip-yo-keys'/
bad attitude,i be rude in school on purpose and he do to/
but fuck what we do,i see a nigga i can hit-thru/
i got verses fo days,dont know who i sold my spit-to/
wasnt payin attention,so bitch i didnt get-you/
liable to kill ya throat and keep-ya-alive/
think ya got a clique,ill beat-ya-five/Holla

come on yo this board dont even give ya no feedback!LMAO!Nobody will ever come up on this board cause u dont know what other people think of yo shit!!The format of this board hot but if u gets no feed off yo shit u cant get better!

ummm..this was kidna wack..u seem to have the basics down..flow was so so..multis were ok..seemed like u tried too hard tho..no real metas..u had a lot of stupid lines that made his worse than what it was..like kill ya throat..and smack ya sleep..just doesnt make sense..keep at it..