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jaKKal vs ANTI-HERO
AIGHT LETS GO HERB:
1.10-30 LINES 2.DUE BY TOMORROW AT 12 MID 3.NO HATE, D/R VOTES 4.U GO FIRST |
Sure captain! got to go though i'll drop tomorrow aieght!?.......................................... .................................................. ...............................VICTORY!!!!!!!!!
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OK KID NVM IM GONNA SPIT FIRST AND NO FEEDING .................................................. ..................
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IMA TRY A NEW STYLE I JUSS PICKED UP
Who's this whack emcee easin the words like a Verbal-Laxitive// In this battle you get smoked in the open like cops to Herbal-Activists// (Herb=smokin) rappin-this, bitch its curtains when I stab ya eyes and closed-the-blinds// Ya nosey-rhymes will get u whistle-whipped with water picks and Frozen-chimes// I broke-ya-lines, cuz aint no concrete words u spit are Hard-to-get// Try to prespire me, I'll kill u sharp witout even 1 shard-of-sweat// (shard=sharp) Ima bard-of-death, turnin u psyco like daffy duck on Loony-Tunes// (Bards play tunes) Soon Ima scrunch ya mind till it trips like takin Pruny-shrooms// fag u like an acid tryin to neutralize and stop-a-base// (acids neutralize bases..chemistry) I'll leave u like a fallen-lawyer btich, so drop-the-case// (Lawyers= court cases) Ima chainsaw, let the chain-claw dangle ya flesh through ya trakial// Rip ya spleen through the "point" of incision like a pen to the radial// Take ya buddah, stab 2 of ya eyes so that it makes u a cyclops// I might drop...u, like a ninja assinatin from high-tops// Wit a slick slash and quick dash to ya throat cavity// Ima "mia, let you go" die like Queen from "bohemiem rapcity"// *Chain tears through the flesh* Any crew to verse u through at me, gets ripped through the-set// Take some oil, ya flows rusty like a machete when-wet// Make u spagetti-n-fet...ta-cheese, noodle-boy, u only backtrackin ya knees// Make u kneel-back, peel ya flesh off like I did to ya neice// Fabrese can't outstank the faggot-maggot that u reakin// From too much cock in the mouth, well here's a dick, stop speakin// |
plans changed...................i'm back mothafucka
its the, return of the JaKKaL, nigga been gone so long that from the screen you can feel my claws tearin at you! and pussy nigga playin me sweet, knowin we playin for keeps walk up in yo home and smack you wit the gloc in ya sleep! i dont know the hell you made it rappin but like yo commercials say "the Cap can make it happen!" and please when its down to the 'wire" the only time you poppin yo trunk is when ya bitch ass is changin ya tire now you call yourself an anti hero or somethin the fuck thats supose to mean that "you a villan or somethin!?" and you them B&C rabbits all move in the same style its like all of you faggots tryin to rap after 8 mile! next time you try to battle wit JaKKaL you betta yieid you dont even have a whip you slide around on yo shield! i could battle all day but im done wit cha scares CAPTAIN AMERICA you wasnt my 16 bars!! |
OK UPPIN FOR SUM VOTES HERE
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yo C.A. that was a pretty hot ass verse you dropped son mad props. and on that last bar it was suppose to be you wasnt worth my 16 bars. props to you du!
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OH YEAH NOW U KISS MY ASS AND SHIT I AINT GIVIN U NO PROPS WITH UR WACK ASS VERSE U FUCKING HERB I AINT LIKE U AT ALL MAKIN FUN OF CAPTAIN AMERICA AND SHIT HE OWULD KICK THE SHIT OUT OF WOLVERINE
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uppin for some votes
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Anti-Hero was the winner!!! better everything...metas, punches, multis, wordplay, flow...JaKKal...just keep battlin...
VOTE=ANTI-HERO |
damn du i aint kissin ya ass or nothin
im just showin love. you cant take a joke? i thought it was funny. and by the way oh great one if you stab both of my eyes then that would not make me a cyclops. just thought you should know that for the future. |
OH WELL IDC ABOUT THAT ANYWAYS KID IM BETTER THAN U ANYWAYS MAN GOD DAMN UR WACK SERIOUSLY I DONT LIKE U AND I NEVER WILL SO DONT TRY TO SAY UR JOKIN
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appreciate it dog.....
i feel so loved--------- ------------------------- -------------------------- |
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werd. neither were good in my opinion...Jakkal most of your shit didnt even rhyme dukes...& dont say "nigga" in your raps it takes away from the effect... AH is getting better but you still got a ways to go dukes... |
well if you read it right then my shit did rhyme
but thats cool though im learnin. C.A.-2, JaKKaL-0 uppin for more votes come on i can take it |
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