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18wheeler vs Mentally Kursed
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HIS VERSE
Spit physchoatic slurs wit vivid verbs, sayin fuck in ya sleep is tha only reason u mentally kursed// layin it down on this herb , never seen him spit but his bars can't match my words// dog i'll do ya brains like butter cause u about to get churned// bullets r into fitness after they pump ya chest u guarantee to feel tha burn// got insomniac matics so like liquor tha shots would burn through ya an put u ta sleep// just a lil bull shit mad late and a nigga rhymin o well do ya thing son |
MY VERSE
aight check it this pussy is catchin aids, like the quote you are what you eat, so that means I got this bitch pukin knuckles for weeks// Im choppin you into pieces then leavin the debris, scattered everywhere bones piled in a heap, your brain is left mentally deficient and unconscious but in a peaceful sleep underground 6 feet deep// im invincible, you could stab me with a knife and i still wont bleed// Ill remove your organs then inject them wit AIDS for free, im lyrically decapatain this femcee endin his life from intense pains of struggle and hardships of agony// (you lived a pitiful life) im usin your voice box screamin through it so he yelled// my punches strike hard to the mouth theyll leave your jaw swollen and swelled, ill mentally slice your throat causin your body to run dry cause all your blood expelled// (blood loss) |
uppin for votes (1)
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dont sleep people vote (3) uppin
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mentally kursed took it.... easy....really easy... no beef.. *props* to 18 wheeler.... aight mentally kursed had flow diss rhyme and what not.... it was pimp.... but it was a nice batttle
Vote= MK "Karat" http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4066#post714066 |
uppin fo mo votes
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Yo Mentally Kursed
Stop Uppin You Only Get 5 UPPS A Battle but yea 18wheelers Verse Was Wack As Fuck Mentally Kursed Got This On Every Topic vote=Mentally Kursed |
18 was horrible
no structure no flo....NUTHIN kursed was OK nothin hot but good enough to win VOTE kursed |
aight thanks fo votein uppin fo mo votes (5)
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mentally kursed took this shit... he had flow, wordplay, and punches.... 18 was whack
vote=mentally kursed |
vote= Mentally Kursed
his verse was better. had some attemtps at punches, better vocab, flowed better, he came harder. but he wasnt that great, both need some elevation |
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