dean vs ryu
 

10 lines max.....
no crew/d/r etc
5 votes win
15 mins to spit
you go 1st

Checkin...............................U WILL GET MERKED!@!!!!! LMAO!!>....................................

aiiighhtttt fuk it i'll spit...........bored......

this is the barrel of the barretta that you fixatin' to,you can't attack a soul with a name like "ryu"//1//
like a streetfighter am kickin your chinese ass,to get ma past me your gonna need a veterans "pass"//2//
"at last",you finally know,that yourself is a "hoe",'n' your gonna be a no "show"//3//
to srew tha lid,"kid",coz i've ma mark on you like a skyliners "skid"//4//
this is a game of russian roulette,you gamblin' everythin but i took ya "bet"//5//
a vet, thats wot i soon to be,5oo posts for you but 500 wins for "me"//6//
coz you're a fake ass punk,thats sunk,if you were a bottle of coke,i'd already have u "drunk"//7//
so itake you down in "one",the battle hasn't begun,its already "won"//8//
another win for me,i can't stop "elevatin",you stutterin' too much,your prone to "hesitatin"//9//
so take my verbal "tips",take away your bad "pips",eveythin is bullshit that comes out ya fukin' "lips"//10//

yo my verse was freestyled so it maybe pretty weak.............feedbak plz...................................

** Picks up mic **

BATTLE IN SESSION

[align=center]..:: STARTER ::..

Wars-Ensue..I Hold Keyz Of Divisionz If My Text-Splitz-More-Than-You ..
Dean , You Couldn't Mount-It-Yah-Wha[/]i If You Were A Desperate-Whoring-Jew !//~1

I Sparr-The-Bic..This Whore Getz KO'd Like Pimp'z With Talcum-Pullin-Armored-Fistz ..
Ryu About To Leave Your Frame Rugged Like An Album-Full-Of-Carpet-Picz !//~2

..:: MURDA ::..

Dean Passes-Vague-Threatz..Plus Your Track'z Are Off ' Like Disasterous-Train-Wreckz ..
Herb, Your Flow Is So ' Watered Down ' Even Your Mic'z Cashed-In-As-Rain-Checkz !//~3

..:: FINISHER ::..

Grappling-Eyez-To-Ryu..He Only Has ' Tight Hitz ' When Strapping-Guyz-With-The-Leather ..
You Wouldn't Have The ' Upper Hand ' In This If He Capitalized-Every-Letter !//~4

Just 4 barz.......Thats all I needed[/i]

U JUST GOT MURKED!!

** Picks up mic **

BATTLE IN SESSION

[align=center]..:: STARTER ::..

Wars-Ensue..I Hold Keyz Of Divisionz If My Text-Splitz-More-Than-You ..
Dean , You Couldn't Mount-It-Yah-Wha[/]i If You Were A Desperate-Whoring-Jew !//~1

I Sparr-The-Bic..This [i]Whore Getz KO'd Like Pimp'z With Talcum-Pullin-Armored-Fistz ..
Ryu About To Leave Your Frame Rugged Like An Album-Full-Of-Carpet-Picz !//~2

..:: MURDA ::..

Dean Passes-Vague-Threatz..Plus Your Track'z Are Off ' Like Disasterous-Train-Wreckz ..
Herb, Your Flow Is So ' Watered Down ' Even Your Mic'z Cashed-In-As-Rain-Checkz !//~3

..:: FINISHER ::..

Grappling-Eyez-To-Ryu..He Only Has ' Tight Hitz ' When Strapping-Guyz-With-The-Leather ..
You Wouldn't Have The ' Upper Hand ' In This If He Capitalized-Every-Letter !//~4

Just 4 barz.......Thats all I needed

U JUST GOT MURKED!![/align]

aight i knew i'd av to come harder nice verse.....................ha ha weak verse by me........................anotha underestimation................................... .......................

^^ GOTTA COME HARDER THAN THAT MAN^^

** Picks up mic **

BATTLE IN SESSION

..:: STARTER ::..

Wars-Ensue..I Hold Keyz Of Divisionz If My Text-Splitz-More-Than-You ..
Dean , You Couldn't Mount-It-Yah-Wha[/]i If You Were A Desperate-Whoring-Jew !//~1

I Sparr-The-Bic..This [i]Whore Getz KO'd Like Pimp'z With Talcum-Pullin-Armored-Fistz ..
Ryu About To Leave Your Frame Rugged Like An Album-Full-Of-Carpet-Picz !//~2

..:: MURDA ::..

Dean Passes-Vague-Threatz..Plus Your Track'z Are Off ' Like Disasterous-Train-Wreckz ..
Herb, Your Flow Is So ' Watered Down ' Even Your Mic'z Cashed-In-As-Rain-Checkz !//~3

..:: FINISHER ::..

Grappling-Eyez-To-Ryu..He Only Has ' Tight Hitz ' When Strapping-Guyz-With-The-Leather ..
You Wouldn't Have The ' Upper Hand ' In This If He Capitalized-Every-Letter !//~4

Just 4 barz.......Thats all I needed

U JUST GOT MURKED!!

y you send it through twice............................................. .................................................. .............

vote 4 ryu... better punches an' wordplay... the train wreck 1 is played tho....................
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Ryu came hard as hell wit the wordplay.......good verse by dean but i don't think you knew what was comin'........haha.........well good battle anyways

Vote-Ryu

i think ryu took this wit his wordplay... dean did aight, but im sure he could have elevated....


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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD

UPPIN ON VOTES PLZ>.................................................. ....................................

Ryu had this with more originality, lines like this...
Ryu About To Leave Your Frame Rugged Like An Album-Full-Of-Carpet-Picz !//~

Sos Dean but he gets my vote..................betta flow originality and wordplay....

uppin plz............................................... .................................................. .....................................

vote- ryu

even thos dashes are gay... battle was barely decent.. didnt really like both verses.. but ryu had harder punches.