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Ambiguous vs. ~JacK ThA RippA~
10 lines MAX... blah, the other thread was filled with freeposting.
I'll quote your verse into here. |
Quote:
Blah... there are your SIX "lines". |
Here are my TEN lines...
Jack’s like the homeless without A/C… this bum can’t take my heat// Sprawlin’ on the pavement is the only way you’re… in touch with the streets// I’m like pissed off vendors at baseball games… i’ll rip this kracka jack// Fuck gettin’ slapped… this bitch needs to be smacked just for bein’ whack// Ya nuthin’ but a reject… even your calendar turned you down for a date// Wearin’ Carson Palmer’s jersey is the closest you’ll come to number eight//(wins) I’ll 7-6 ya like iverson cuz ya spittin’ shit not worthy of recyclin’ bins// Member of fatal componentz… that’s enough to be red-skinned like washington// I’ll beat this bitch 5-0h… like the cops just burst into the thread// He knows he can’t beat me with ten lines… so he wrote thirty instead// Votes, no hate votes, crew votes, blah blah blah, no dick ride votes especially. |
UP(1) votes please.
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UP(2)
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Straight and to the point was Amby...
I don't know what Jack was thinkin when he wrote that novel. Dude... I stretch lines. Like a motherfucker... But Jack's verse should win an Oscar for it's portrayl of a 6 line rhyme. That was clearly 20 - 25 lines. If I could, I'd vote just for that... But I wouldn't need to cuz Amby handled this shit on his own... Ripped nice metas, wordplay, and funny, personal, hard hitting punches. There ya go... Text Vote: Amby |
^Heh... funny text vote, need real votes thoughhhhhh, anyways, i just wanna clear up some of my punches since jack tha rippa's name isn't here yet... his rec is 7-5... hence my 7-6 punch... and the 8 punch... ok, 1-0 in text votes... 0-0 in poll votes.
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^WTF... don't SPAM my battle thread, fuck outta here.
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hahahaahahaha ohhhhhhh shit votin fer ambig.... shit dude.... that was tyte... u had flow punches and structure.... i loved ur endin...... damnnn that was tyte VOTE= AMBIGUOUS poll
*Props* to Jack Tha Rippa "Karat" |
1-0, more votes.
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UP(3)
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uppin for these cats i guess............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................
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vote-ambiguous.......there is clearly no need to explain......but, i dont have 100 posts..so it doesn't count...figured i'd put my opinion in anyways........
by the way...if ya got time...drop a vote here..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4568#post714568 P C Z |
vote = ambig
yo c'mon jack that shit was at best elementary and had no structure or rhyme scheme hit this up http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=73429 |
yeah jack was pretty sad... i mean writing a freakin book is just stupid. And gay. Maybe even stupidgay. Its hard to read, makes the flow terrible, and u dont hit as hard. Amb came with his 10 lines, straight, to the point, and there you go. Simple and easy. And NOT stupidgay. In any case, vote = Amb. peace.............
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