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Axiom 08-18-03 03:55 PM

Ambiguous vs. ~JacK ThA RippA~
 
10 lines MAX... blah, the other thread was filled with freeposting.

I'll quote your verse into here.

Axiom 08-18-03 03:57 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by ~JacK ThA RippA~
Thats the wrong name for you son Ambiguous means to have 2 meanings not 1, the only meaning in this battle is to make ya run, You think its fun to mess with big guns, and smoke your fake blunt's, which your probably stole from your mom after you your brunch from her cunt, but when it comes to battle's you choke and shun, your just like the bitches mobb deep disses in Shook ~ones~

Like Mike Strahan, your bout to meet a tight end, your jackin with your stray hand to pics of fucken men, you think your a gangsta, you fucken jew I see you every night with your yamaca in Ben's, your so stupid you thought strawberry daquiri was a fruit blend, sittin in your den pretended like you got friends, who want's to be a friend to a vet who hits weaker then a kid his under 10, this fucken whigga can't rap his record's about to ~amend~

I'm persistant with my spittin, your just resistin the instant it comes for your spit you start pissin, tryin to bite off songs you think people never listen to, right now your tryin to keep your distant, this kids a chicken he probably won't even spit till tommorow, he thinks hes an unbeatable tiger hes weaker then a kitten, after he fucked his mom to get a bitten ~prewritten~

I'll just here slit your wrists and you lips we don't have to listen to your spit, you think your tight but your the worst push over that I ever hit, you talk shit and think you'll always have perpetual bliss, By the time I'm through with you you'll be afraid to piss, cause you never know I'll be I don't even need to spit anymore cause you've already been ripped, hell your already wearin more make up then the whole band of KISS, forget what I said before, your not worth my time, your just a balarina ~priss~

This kid think's he's innate, but who the fuck would instigate, on a fucken hoar for her charge rate? (his mom's), he was probably born from a dud condom, on his mom's first date, this bitch is a hoar, been screwin his family since he was eight, your just bait to get raped, half your bodies fake, like michale jackson, your devolving into a primate, go to the zoo maybe then you'll get a ~mate~

Your hideously insidious, cause your insatiable but unable to grip reality, to me your rhymes are like fable, hop back in your craddle, your not ready for the big boy's table, This fight I didn't even have to use my knive's, I just bashed you with a ladle, No one wants to watch you, your more boring the cable, after this battle my rep might go high but your's is ~deflatable~


Blah... there are your SIX "lines".

Axiom 08-18-03 03:59 PM

Here are my TEN lines...

Jack’s like the homeless without A/C… this bum can’t take my heat//
Sprawlin’ on the pavement is the only way you’re… in touch with the streets//

I’m like pissed off vendors at baseball games… i’ll rip this kracka jack//
Fuck gettin’ slapped… this bitch needs to be smacked just for bein’ whack//

Ya nuthin’ but a reject… even your calendar turned you down for a date//
Wearin’ Carson Palmer’s jersey is the closest you’ll come to number eight//(wins)

I’ll 7-6 ya like iverson cuz ya spittin’ shit not worthy of recyclin’ bins//
Member of fatal componentz… that’s enough to be red-skinned like washington//

I’ll beat this bitch 5-0h… like the cops just burst into the thread//
He knows he can’t beat me with ten lines… so he wrote thirty instead//

Votes, no hate votes, crew votes, blah blah blah, no dick ride votes especially.

Axiom 08-18-03 04:07 PM

UP(1) votes please.
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Axiom 08-18-03 04:22 PM

UP(2)
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Reborn2KillAgain 08-18-03 04:37 PM

Straight and to the point was Amby...

I don't know what Jack was thinkin when he wrote that novel.

Dude...

I stretch lines.

Like a motherfucker...

But Jack's verse should win an Oscar for it's portrayl of a 6 line rhyme.

That was clearly 20 - 25 lines.

If I could, I'd vote just for that...

But I wouldn't need to cuz Amby handled this shit on his own...

Ripped nice metas, wordplay, and funny, personal, hard hitting punches.

There ya go...

Text Vote: Amby

Axiom 08-18-03 04:40 PM

^Heh... funny text vote, need real votes thoughhhhhh, anyways, i just wanna clear up some of my punches since jack tha rippa's name isn't here yet... his rec is 7-5... hence my 7-6 punch... and the 8 punch... ok, 1-0 in text votes... 0-0 in poll votes.

Axiom 08-18-03 04:41 PM

^WTF... don't SPAM my battle thread, fuck outta here.
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24 karat 08-18-03 04:51 PM

hahahaahahaha ohhhhhhh shit votin fer ambig.... shit dude.... that was tyte... u had flow punches and structure.... i loved ur endin...... damnnn that was tyte VOTE= AMBIGUOUS poll
*Props* to Jack Tha Rippa

"Karat"

Axiom 08-18-03 05:02 PM

1-0, more votes.
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Axiom 08-18-03 05:13 PM

UP(3)
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Sir Cedrych 08-18-03 05:35 PM

uppin for these cats i guess............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................

SiCkSiCkLy 08-18-03 05:41 PM

vote-ambiguous.......there is clearly no need to explain......but, i dont have 100 posts..so it doesn't count...figured i'd put my opinion in anyways........

by the way...if ya got time...drop a vote here.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4568#post714568


P C Z

$pitacular 08-18-03 05:45 PM

vote = ambig

yo c'mon jack that shit was at best elementary and had no structure or rhyme scheme

hit this up

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=73429

Symilee 08-18-03 05:48 PM

yeah jack was pretty sad... i mean writing a freakin book is just stupid. And gay. Maybe even stupidgay. Its hard to read, makes the flow terrible, and u dont hit as hard. Amb came with his 10 lines, straight, to the point, and there you go. Simple and easy. And NOT stupidgay. In any case, vote = Amb. peace.............


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