Heard Some Bad News
 

Too long have I gazed at life in da wrong ways ,before I knew it, I stopped getting praised for things dat I say.
I live Life da Hard Way ,I's Got to keep on living dese streets each day ,N- get payed to raise my fa-mil-e
Im In-a another Country , where Im da Nigger , I feed off the weak , it keeps my mind bigger
And Harder , I got to keep strong , Can't die like a Martyr with a wasted song , end up where I don't belong
Be forgotten like a loser, another druguser , I am a chooser of Free Choice , Hear my Free Voice !
I keep screaming in-jus-tice , in the streets dis is a-hard-truth
I keep Searching for the right path , Careful' I don't get a foot up My Ass
I tiptoe thru minefields , I slap hoes in Highheels , My friend died-LastWeek-ITs For-Real
Missed his last meal -with da fams , Cause he was on da run , out on da Lamb
He ended up eating Lead-n-his-own-bonemarrow , instead of Ham, biscuits and Moms Cali-flowa
Now is my Darkest Hour , I feel like I could of done a little more
Instead I heard da news playing vids , sitting on my cold floor
Death in da News , rings true , its hurts you - in da worst way
You feel like a shadow , without power , 2 hours- is a long day
I heard some Bad News , gave me the Ol' Blues , I guess he paid his dues , da hard way.


Fuck It , I can't write anymore

Peace , CrazyE

TIGHTNESS FROM THE GATE TWIN REAL TO THE HEART AND REFLECTENT ON US AS WELL YOU STILL ORDO ABACHO

feelin' some parts... not all... your flow was staggered, the lines need to be evened out a bit more too.. some were to long an' others were too short (syllably speaking) .. other than that, up the vocab a bit, an' stay up... 1

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^peep this