my rhyme flow
 

steppin in front with pen in my hand/
throw the pen on the ground and grab the mic and put it on stand/
rippin and tearin rhymes out my mouth splashin this shit to people that hear/
comin up to me like some tough guy with no fear/
breakin you lyrically to these beats that i twist and squeeze the life out of you/
fallin down off a building knockin the air out of you/
i start dashin bombs comin from over there/
standin there calm watchin them fall to the ground/
burnin it up and slickin it up with pound/
Jumpin over the rocks that are being thrown/
comin down splittin them in half with my arms/
releasin this shit you better sound the alarms/
cause im comin after yall so dont hide/
this aint a game i think i will make you die/
findin you and crippplin you up with the heat rising eatin you up like you a little piece/
killin all of yall and now im goin to start bringin the peace/

not bad flow, you pro'lly better at audio... lyrically tho it seemed not too good.. wordplay was kind-of stupid and there were no real good punches... but for pretty much a newbie it's good...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74026
^peep this

blunt said it best..might be better at audio..maybe..but this lacke in all areas..the content was pretty stupid..how do u jump over rocks that ppl are throw n?..