Thug 4 life
 

i remember when i was young,
didn't have to worry bout carryin guns,
didn't have to worry bout wathcin my back
but now, i got the crew for that
always together, chillin and hanging wih the fellas
don't take shit from no one, got somehtin to say, tell us
we'll fuck you up, won't give you a 2nd glance
beat you bad, you won't even stand a chance
we don't give a fuck, if your big, small, got a gun or knife
we'll still fuck you up, cause we're T4L, thugz 4 life

Fight you any where any time,
come back, still have time to write a rhyme
cause you won't last for very fuckin long
fuck u'll be done by the end of this song

hey yo, verse 2.....
scared now ain't you...
ya bitches can't ever pop the thugz
cause somehow u'll end up hidding under rugs
cause we don't get caught when we kill you bitch
and if we do, i really don't give....a shit
it'll be worth doin 10 to 50 years in prison
so fuck you, it was your decision
I'm always gonna be a thug no matter what happens
so don't wirry guys, we'll always keep bustin and cappin

thugz 4 life
peace
uppin

i dont like thug raps but i like that you did show you have talent work on it and polish it this wasnt bad

uppin

There was parts I liked more than others. I think you were kinda missin somethin that pulls it all together.

uppin

it was aight,needs alil improvement but you got tha right ideas and it'll come dawg.

peace

you do need alot of improvement man, up your vocab... and stay away from thug rap, 'cause you're not a thug.. you live in newbrunswic... come on.. I know newbrunswic isn't even close to gangsta like the population of the whole province is pro'lly 2 million... lol... so yea, advice... VOCAB, WORD-PLAY, FLOW... flow is a simple 4-4 beat for any beat... listen to the snare... and write to that, forget the melody even exists.. if you learn how to catch the snare then work on writing to the melody aswell..