~Off Tha Top~
 

In life if theres love success is capable
State the truth in places where its placed by few...
I love everybody but im fresh outta kind phrases
My minds racin and I cant deny patience...
Probaly assumed that id be that freak slideshow
Strung out swung out high broke
Displayin gutter magic for appeal of the masses(Gotta Dollar?)
This saxophone here can play any song you like
And this music for your soul just might prolong your life
Get you having sex again like greatest hits from Barry White
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My thoughts run along outside their houses carrying
On provoking conversations knockin patience...
For individuals that cant face facts they force feed...
Eyes to the skies perhaps god can riddle me with more glee...
Verse construction takes place without beats..
African drums rejoice upon the pressure cooker...
Dancin for brainstorms...often answered prayers....
For my ancestors someone had to care...
They're out and demand wisdom..
Creative insight what the pen writes is magnificent
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Yall know I come longer than this freaking a track
Like two asian lesbians with pierced tonges
For those eardrums I fear none....
I'd battle but nobody would understand
A thing that im sayin signed papers
And handshakes for dickriding
Settlements to push their way in as if
They're congressmen and presidents
I dont give a flying fuck no more im setted in
Rhymes written without cursing but I write
In cursive on the page goes the first thing
That pops in my mind to design something worth hearin
Mostly unusual at times like a child with both parents
Patrons in the cyper with leprechaus logic
See me and shoot off their flare guns

the 1st 2 were hot..really feel n it..flow and multis were real good..content was good..a nice read..then the last stanza seemed to fall off..flow was choppy..couldnt tell where 1 line ended and the other began..but as far as the 1st 2..real hot..

theyre called doubles in the third verse...
like freeway without the gay voice....

settlements... rhymes with congressmen and presidents...
sayin...rhymes with push their way in
cursing..rhymes with first thing...

it all rhymes but thank you for noticing..seriously

The content in the first two had an Aesop Rock kind of feel..I liked it..You multis in the first verse was pretty hott andyour name fits you well..Very solid content..


Well done, 1ne..

thanks much for the comments I appreciate it

upping....

I just read this again and I am still struck with the amazing message in it. I understand your frustration at not getting your props and just want to tell you not to worry they'll come because they are deserved. The flow is on point and has a sarcastic witty feel to it. Upping you people need to dig inside yourselves when you read this.

thank you...upping