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Multi~plied
Im hazardous!
with content of constent cosinents – combine like pangia and seven continents- spit a verse nigguz could die from my toxins and anti~oxins – punches and hook’s like usen broken glass while slap boxin- leave you scared and shook-checkmate when you go against this rook- look I rock like graphite rock like stone rock like the periodic table and desert lands- I been rocking since back in the day of Serbian babylonion and utopion sands- My flow’s the evoportaion to condensation in cycle …..styfle the condenced scientifical mind spand- Any brain storm I let loose will happen again- lyrically be~yond eons of interterestial celestial intellect ,advancements you primitive p~eons ….are so ample- think you got ten fingers that can handle-how ? Bio chemists were sent to breakdown the compounds of my blood samples- Make anthrax when you shake my syntax with ink solutions- The con~clusion- of how my line chemistry can cause fusion-is con~fus~en- Subject matter mixed to DNA a~toms equal napalm- but on the remix create mega~ton bombs – each verse is like the BIBLE’s…one song- equals more qoutables then the book of psalms- Refuse to see de~feat-so if it happened tell admin to press de~lete- Want beaf? be dis~crete- or get diss~ed….You only spits dimes cause “TALK IS CHEAP”- Rappers rep hip hop you just misusen and abusen for your amusement- I am rap in battle you die when you face the MUSIC. assess get served or get what they deserve depending if you loose it- pending how you choose it- |
nice drop, but the whole ting bin played ova and ova again. ya whole style changes from comples multis to complex vocab to complex played lines lol
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This was a keystyle...wurd to all newbs i think all words stuff is(word clarify that), this was a nice key had some dope lines and like the alliteration in the firstcouple of bars...sounds extremely hot...oNe
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THIS I SKEYSTYLED I DONT PREWRITE TO POST HERE THIS IS JUST SITTING AND TYPING BUT HOW DO YOU ASSUME THIS IS PLAYED WHAT IS PLAYED IN THIS
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ALSO IT IS A COMPARISON RHYME AND EVOLUTION IIF YOU WILL READ THE POST TWIN
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look I rock like graphite rock like stone rock like the periodic table and desert lands-
I been rocking since back in the day of Serbian babylonion and utopion sands- That's sick! Much props on this one..In some parts it staggered..Your complexity level rised a bit since the last one i saw and your content in some parts have me thinking "Maybe i was wrong, this kid could very well be an advanced member"..But the lines i just quoted i thought was very creative..Tho the "rock like granit" had been done by Benefit..Props to a partially hot keystyle..Just seeing you able to ake a few hott lines shows me ou have it in you...All ou need now is a more multi syllabic style and a little consistency within your verse.. Stay up 1ne |
SO WAS IT A GOOR RHYME OR NOT?PA YOU LOST ME A LIL IN YOUR COMMENT
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Yes, i enjoyed it for the most part..
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nice... multi's weren't all that, but I was feelin' the lines in general, had a nice clean flow... the "rock like granite" part of the rock lines was played.. I've seen it in a few rhymes, underground shit mainly, Benefit being one of the artists.. but whatever... I liked how the delivery was layed out... stay up1
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