shockthaworld vs amend
 

Nice little Battle
15-20 Lines
you know the basic rules
no crews, dickriders stay away !!


spit sometime soon, today tomorrow

hopefully soon



I'm spitting first

lets go

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Checkin .. .
Checkin I. .
Checkin In .
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checkin in, and dropping my verse

look Let ammend Swallow Magic's Jersey.. *Ya Vomit* ..And Yet Couldn't Throwback Illness../
shOck Brings A Whole New Meaning To Relax When I *Really* Kickback Ya Assess ../
shock A Flawless-Artist., Kick My Saw-Dust Inside amend's Eye-Lids..Silence-Him, I’m Wildin’ Violence Begin Cryin’ Kids ../ Like Urinating In Toilette Bowls, You Ain’t Applying Shit ../
Slicing Ya Scripts, Just Stick To Writing ‘Poetic Realness’ Ya Dimwit../
My Willingness To Run Ya Mess With A |Car.. Son! Daily| Be Like Total Requests ../
Test Ya Stress..I’ll Re-arrange ‘amend" And Bring ‘War’ To His Doorsteps../
Cuz shock Keeps The Crowd Going Like Recess Fights..See-Sex And I’ll X-Site Ya Blind Tonight /
I'll Play Solitaire-With-Ya-Mind And-Lets-Your-Thoughts-Shuffle ./
.I'm Aware-of-This-Kind-That-Got-Caught-In-Trouble.. Fought Hard But Now Lies In The Rubble../

( switch it up a tad )

look i spit suspenseful and must be a dermatoligist, the way i Scar-Tissues../
Just cause you dont collect magazines, dont mean u dont got Serious-Issues../
with god as a witness, my pen Rapes-The-Page ya Statements-Frayed-N-Blatant-Rage../
watch this Ancient-Sage-Erase-Ya-Ways & Burn the WEEK like Satan's-DAYS../
im sendin nothin but 'Quotables-After-You' to provide Voters-A-Laugh-Or-Two../
cause droppin played gun bars is ammend's most Notable-Attiribute../

(switch, Pay Attention Closely ending)

look Splash whiskers, crash this puss quicker than terroristic bitches ..im beyond illness/
shock's willingness to merk these herbs to pieces.. aMend's Half Ass’d Releases more kids than a Fag’s Feces .. /
Please kid, ima reck this innocent victim wit lefts across ya chin../ Lose by ko or duck the battle--ya only elec-tive.. cuz shock the type to 'Crap all over ya eye-balls', so ya *See* 'Shit from my perspective'/

I'll Glimpse Ya Life, Then Dim Ya Lights - Leave Ya Sockets Swirled
Lets Pretend Ya Writes Could Win This Fight And shockthaworld
Prop'd On Fours, Time To 'Top This Girl' - Like Im Riding U In Ya Av
Confused Son?, Cause The Truth Is, Thats What U Do With Ya Dad
Let Loose With A Wak, Abusin This Cat - Tommorrow's Shatter'd
Wanna Play War? Then Blow The Hell Outa Me - But Swallow After
Hallow Bastard, Im Ya Master - Leaving Ya Shell Splinter'd And Split
U Brought Disaster, But Didnt Follow'd After - Until I Enter'd Submit
Dinner Ya Script, Faggot Rappin Actor - But Never Floss'd In Riches
Your Pussy - Cause We All Know 1-800's Used To Talk To Bitches


And Thats ALL You Get

wow, this was ill.
Shock threw down a pretty good verse, had a nice flow to it, pretty decent punches, etc. But damn, amend killed it with his punches especially the opener and finisher.
Vote=amend
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74007

^^can you guys hit that up? thanx

Man uppin this shit good post amend...

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.. now we need votes



drop a link -- i'll give a vote


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Amend gets this by a ...well he killed you!.
shock u tried but just not on that level yet.
amend with better evrything ....


vote=Amend

lol wtf i guess i just dont see it

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....... feel free to end the battle with the dickriders !!

Wtf?...^ ^ dick ryders? his verse was better....
Oo my bad I was supposed to vote for U, right?....Blah.

my vote amend, let me break it down

flow-amend
wordplay-shock
creativity-amend
complexity-both
structure-amend
multi's-shock
meta's-amend
comedy-amend
enjoyment-both
overall-amend

good battle. stay up peeps

uppin i guess
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yea amend took this by alot....good shyt....1

drop a poll vote please...1

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74546