Avalon -[v/s]- Amend
 

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I'll be here later tonight... stop buggin me...


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kid was mad I haven't posted yet... yet the deadline is w/e... fuckin punk...



*waits for this to drop to 18th page... and then drop a verse*

who were you talkin too.?
you really scare me with this 3rd person shit. . .
post when you want, gee golly

Av does not care that you exist...


^ that is the 3rd person...


and you are the 1st person to be that stupid...



Let's get it on...

I'm still waiting. . .night pookey.!
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lol@pookey...


The truth is a fat woman... wearin Nike Spandex this time,
n' even that means... the truth is he's stretchin the lines
the hottest thing I ever thought... were lines to wow the reader
The hottest thing u ever thought of was getting caught w/ a fever
Your wack Mend... guess after this youll plummet to straight bottom
...n you’d need a doctorate in math, to solve ya weight problem
Im a man of rarity... n’ guess what... this fag is scared of me
Cus I got cancer of the fist, and beating your ass is my therapy
Your old and fat... yet you think of possibly rippin my crew?
Ill read you the riot act…n' let 50 ppl stomp the shit outta you
Forget audio... you ain't even that strong in text fag
And thats sad, cus you've been here longer than Alldig has
don't bitch about the tourney... BYE..! along w/ the other riders
doors only opened for mediocre netcees n up... minimal writers
n' keep it net... walk away from the scene... leave it text b,
cause Av come with clips free... like matrix reloaded... dvds
But Amend's back... YAY..! about to start spittin his rhymes,
So now we all wait n wonder... Who's fuckin shit will he bite,
or recycle and act like he ain't flipped all of them lines.
and with Cool n' Chrit gone now, who's fuckin dick will he ride?
So if he dare to look my way and starts ta talk, man,
he'll get shook and sprayed like a Shasta soda pop can
my flow is hot damn! This chump's so fuckin played out,
the admins gave amend a bye wishin he would stay out
Amend an Amatuer at Text... Says shit 'n get ya skin Fried
his House resemblles Hedgehogs... cept The Pricks on tha Inside
this kid spins, fade-away, shoot'n panties in the hamper right
wanna be great when his will power's run on a hamster's pride
Ill lend thoughts..., and doc ya setups prove ya not shit
When I send shots, and watch the metal group like rock vid’s
u may get more props then Cam n' Evolve cuz them 2 kids,
would rather no show then get they ass beat... like u just did.



Fuck those rules... match it...

Wait A Minute... Did You Mention My Name In Your Rap???

Yeeaaaaaaaa... Evolve... Yeeaaaaaaa!!!

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lmao


You need a hug... I'm so serious...




Dammit I'm so sinseer...



that's crazy... I listened to the black album like twice... OH WELL..!

U Fuckin 'Fruit', I'll 'Pluck Ya Roots' - 'Your A Basket Case'
Like 'Choppin Wood', I Gotta 'Crush' On U - Ax Embraced
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You Should Of Left RB, Av, Island. . .Fuck It - I Think Your All Shit
No Need To Match, I'll Beat Ya With The Bare Min. Like Evolve Did
I Maul Scripts, & Like Retarded Bald Kids - Your Headed Wrong Is.
...Amend'll Leave Ya Up In Smoke Like It's A Cheech & Chong Skit
No Need For A Long Spit, & Stop Droolin' - Mend'll Script'cha Pain
Probably End Up Like Cam. - Dryed Up Under 28 Different Names
Forget Ya Fame, Its Just The Net - & I Know Text Is Cool To YOU
But Im Past That, So This Match Is Like Av :shoot: v/s Bullet-Proof
Cool It Duke, Dont Get Heat'ed - Or I'll Fog Up Any Clear Solutions
Snap, Crackle. . .And I'll Drop Av Like Most New Year Resolutions
You'll Need A Squad Of Hope - Cause No Way Can You Merk 'Mend
Its Funny, Notice You Key'd 22 Lines But Pre-Wrote The First Ten
Want Work Friend.? Be A Ghost. .& Im Known To Diss A Peer, So..
Amend Sees This Battles Like A Protest, All I Need's A Meer Post
Steer Close, & You Better Ride This Win - Theres No Alternatives
Who Names Themself After An Island Where Dead King Author Is
U Lost To Chrit, Witha Flawless Spit - Only Reason For Comparison
With The Both Of Us, In Each Battle - Were Both Declared The Win
U Dont Scare Amend, Fuck A Shakey Verse - & I Dont Need Props
With JUST Text, Your Futures Hairy, Like The Direction A Flea Hops
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blah, got shit to do. . .

Amend has some nice wordplay in the begining of his verse then went to straight punches later on... To me personal punches win battles & Av came with a shit load of those.. but i didnt enjoy reading the novel Av calls a verse...

v. Av


Close Battle

1-0 Av
Thanks For The Fair Vote.!
Upperz
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Wow. For a few headline vets dat wasnt great. It wuz quite annoying having to read all those lines but i have made a decision. AMEND, tho not by much, takes this one. Neithers punches or personals were outstanding, but AMENDs were a bit betta, and mostly everything wuz close. Av's closer/finisher wuz not to bad, but his overall verse wuz not super impressive. Punches were ok, and aside from a few good personals, the rest wuz boo. I'd have to say AMEND took this one, although i'd like to see both come betta on da next battle.
Vote is AMEND.

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