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Anonymiz presents..The Crush
My first open mic. I hope u all enjoy.
Verse1: All alone I stand tryin ta be ur man/ For u girl I would give both of my hands and/ Both of my legs just for u give me a chance/ I'm makin plans to take u dancin/ Make u weak in the knees/ A new lease on love/ Baby girl u released a dove/ Trapped in my cold heart/ Torn apart wit jagged pieces/ My manly intuition sayin forget about women/ But, ur intervention has given me a whole new vision/ No more division, just me wishin and u listenin/ With intentions of bein wit me/ It's been under consideration long enuff/ Quit makin me wait and let's start us/ Change ur relationship situation, I know it's tough/ Here's a little bit of inspiration, in God I trust, We'll make it/ Chorus (repeat x2): Girl, u know I want u/ And yes it is true, I do/ But u won't let go of him/ Verse 2: Hey girl, we haven't talked in a while/ All the while, ma, I've peepin ur style/ The way that u walk and ur beautiful smile/ Have me goin wild, but I have to calm it down/ The word around, is that u got a man/ Who don't even talk to u when he holds ur hand/ The way I see it he can't do u like I can/ Here's my plan, ask u to take my hand/ And as time continues/ I can see a baby girl wit eyes just like u/ And a big house and cars I just copped u/ That life, it would be just grand/ But just another one of my fantasylands/ In reality I'm still tryin to be ur man/ U still wanna know what I'm tryna say/ Okay, I want u more and more at the end of each day/ |
deep shit,did one of these songs maself so i feel ya dawg,good message and expression came through.
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Don't sleep on this...................................uppin for feedback..................................1
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Don't sleep on this...................................uppin for feedback..................................1
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personally i didnt like it, why? as deep as it is, the true essence in hip hop is: creativeness. although ya message was str8, it seemed rookie, u need more creativity
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Aight, thanx..................uppin for feedback
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Feedback plz........................1
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Don't sleep on this...................................uppin for feedback..................................1
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