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I'm a masochist, climaxing as vats of visual acid drip
waves from the outside sit in my lapses which inhabited the greater part of a lesser life, being stuck in this catharsis 83 channeling bloodlust in an abyss of darkness decoding transmissions grants visions of utter agony masked torturers cut anatomies, who lusted fantasy life-the remains of another day sold for minimal gain coating each thought with a subliminal strain, it'll remain no matter the penance, ask for a sentence-i'll grin and lie prerecorded monologues my only source of stimuli satellite feeds my daily sustenance, i pass most days curling my frail frame in front of waves of cathode rays seeking blessed asylum in a world of excessive violence hallucinations overtake reality, bloodshed tests horizons pain thresholds paint chests cold, disciples are derelicts with care, videocameras on tripods shall prepare the crypt a confused heretic, with beta-compatible dreams hoping to be awoken from his with a rabid animal's scream bow to the latest religion where the natives shall pray with a vision mechanical manacles, fatality, hate and derision, nascent edition. |
sick, kinda took the vocab abit too far, remember there people that dont understand you (not that i dont), try and be clever in a sense of creative with vocab, getZ me sta?
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no matter the penance, ask for a sentence-i'll grin and lie
~grin and bear it...funny...well worded~ nancy well writte..nothin to depict from it... even with the content dilluted it still sounds nice... good drop...beware of individuals with a pitbull complex homie oigame malo muchacho? la paz mi hombre please return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74068 |
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wow. . Really good piece, especially in the sectors of vocabulary and flow (as evident by the quoted line). Is this song on your sound-click, by any chance? Only question is, what was your inspiration(s) for writing this? |
Yeah I agree. Very good vocabulary throughout!
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know whats funny, 'Rrowbic? Every one of your threads in open mic seems riddled with freeposts. I guess your custom title makes it a tid bit of poetic justice.
anyways, all your shiet rocks the casba...only your flow was little off at some parts in this, but your rhymes were off the proverbial hook, and the soup makes me feel dizzy. sorry, I jsut don't have much to say to yer crray Z werdology. |
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Me Neither... Thats Why It Was Blessed With The Appropiate Title... :rolleyes: Keep The Freeposting Coming... :) |
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