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Camarac [v/s] Amend -TOPICAL
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5 Votes Win No Herbage Check In Due Tonight Topic The End Of The Road |
Nice Topic. .
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The End Of The Road
Before you realise it, It's over. . Life's Never As Your Told Tears Flow from my Speared Soul, The End Of The Road. Friends, Foes, Both Miss You When Your Gone Like Bredjin Too tired to walk, so i'll collapse on the stairway to heaven. Now nothing Remains, but The Guilt of My Stolen Presence Made it To the Golden Gates held up Soul And Everescence The Pleasant Surroundings turned horrid, Twisted In Sight, And Manisfested Into A Fortress Of Hell right Before My Eyes. The Surface Rised, volcanic eruptions shook my foundation Whether or Knot to Hang myself, Was My Sole Motivation. No phuture planned - eyes scanning the distant anti-screen Trying to Sleep with Eyes open, Hoping this is all a Dream. Tryna move but nothin` happens, so i sit frozen & purgeless Vision fades to black, no purpose, alone w/ the fact im worthless. Dancing with the devil leading, my destination became clear i was Hellbound as my soul voiced its emotion in a Tear. Broken w/ fear, i realised my journey wasnt yet through, Id just reached the same place everybody strives to get too, The End Of The Road. |
The End Of The Road
The Past Presents Its Chance, But No Future - Just A Wasted Gift When Later Comes First, The Road Is Travel'd - Ya Place Is Picked When Put Face To Sin, What Truths Lay Within - For The Road Is A Life-time Worth Of Problems, Before Death, Your Bestowed With On Cobbled Stones I Hobble Home, And When The Road Is Done It Doesnt Mean The End Is Chosen, - But Just For Those To Come From Birth I Strive Death, Twice Begotten, And Enticed To Walk It The Road Is Worn, Earth Eroded, - The Symbol Of Life's Forgotten Fear's Obey'd, For The Road Is Judgement - For Them That Pass And Only Spirits Brave Could Walk Among It And Defend Their Acts The End At Last, Its Just A New Start On Whats Greater Then Birth Thats Walkin The Road With A Heart To Meet The Creator Of Earth |
Not Bad 'Mend. .
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2 good topicals here.....
Amend seemed too preachy as James came with better imagery with a story type flow.... Both made good use of the topic but my vote goes to James Bondage |
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whats that shit^?
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Cam, U Got This. Close It.
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i thought someoe got it :)
cam... liked his choice of words better like "stairway to heaven" and his metties.... both were good and its hard to vote on these things... would ne one like to do one with me? im probably very good although never done one before. id be a good match for cam i bet :) wanna try cam? this is feeble minded by the way. new name. |
how about me? peep my topical with sureal, or we can do a normal battle
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ok. ill topical battle you amend.
would you mind going first or both at once? oh and you pick the topic im bad at that. hit me back in here...ill be waitin...or u can just make a thread. |
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