J.K.O. .:vs:. Doctor Jizzle
 

10 lines
no crew, hate, D/r votes
no biting, feeding, recycling

u drop first

this bitch doctor j,he cant rap hes a fuckin fake/
i can drown you with out even put your face a lake,i drowned u on dry land and u sank/
bitch you need to change your style,cause it aint workin has stealin shit from 8mile/
i will leave u dyin and try to connect and dial,your a nobody cause you got a burnt file/
your gonna be prayin and wishin,bitch i got you scared like a chicken/
stop spitten your better at watchin and listen,think your gonna win stop trippen/
i got doctor j mess up and stupid,he'll never get a girl even if he ask cupid/
dude that aint vocka that your drinkin its fluid,he thinks he can spit but he doesnt no music/
yo doctor j i found a biter,his names doctor jizzle im kickin his ass has if i were a street fighter/
i got him burnin from my lighter,i got him more blacker than a miner/

Is that ur spit
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Ur A vet wit over 800 post and ur 11-5 and thats the best u came up wit wheres the vocab

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anyways i'll drop mine in like 15-20

who gives a fuck about wat you think your the one pre writin and shit so u should shut the fuck up oh excuse the language i forgot your a goody-good who never gets in truble

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Ur A Vet...But Ur Spit Is Like An Illiterate Child Wrote It,
Ur Name Stands For "Jackin Kids Off"...Here I'll Quote It//2

Leavin U Speechless Like Mimes...Split-U-Wit-Rhymes,
I'll Put Exotic Dancers In Ur Head And Really Strip-U-Of-A-Mind//4

Pull Ya Brain Through Ya Mouth And Make U Think Before-U-Speak,
Like Studyin' Organisms, This Freeposter Wanna Explore-My-Peak//6

Finisher
Ya See This Match I Ain't Sweatin It, Murder Ya Verse Cuz Ya Illest Bars Are Delicate,
Don't Focus On Metaphors Cuz Either Way Ur Gettin Killed In The Subject And Predicate!!!//8
I'll Shove Ur Voicebox In Ya Esophagus, Makin U Choke-On-Ya-Words,
U'd Think I Choked-On-Chronic Da Way I Smoked-This-Herb//10

Uppin 4 Votes

uppin 4 votes

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0-0

Doctor J ripped this kid......

the ryhme scheme for JKO just didnt come off very well...
where as Doctor stayed consistent with good punches and wordplay....


Vote- Doctor

thanx 4 votin chrit

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uppin 4 votes

1-0

JKO came straight wack here
no beef but that sucked

DOCTOR J had better structure flow dissing and wordplay

VOTE DOC J

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74447

thanx 4 votin MiCsYcKlE

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2-0 and uppin

thanx 4 votin GridLockDaFelon but next time can u not quote
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people think quotin is d/r...............thanks for votin though
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uppin 4 votes.............3-0

Doctor killed this kid...beter flow, punches, wordplay, diss,s the whole lot...no hate..some dope lines doctor...One

vote-doctor J

pot1ent remember to poll vote
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thanx 4 the votes
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4-0 after pot1ent poll votes

I really felt Doctors J's FLow , and in the meantime he slipped everything else in der too , Multi's , Heavy punches , Word Flips , Complexity .........It was Solid.

JKO was Good too , but His verse wasn't as complex , and his punches lacked the KO quality .... He had a good flow going and good rythmes.

Good Battle allaround , But I think Dr J , cemented the victory

Peace , CrazyE