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WORD~PERFECT 08-20-03 02:35 PM

for those who call women hoes
 
First came-game-
Then a name-to this dame-
The conversation where you feel you no each other-
The seduction to turn a friend to a lover-
Love made cause sex would require a rubber-
Then find out this martyr,
couldn’t be a father,
when he found you would become a mother-
then comes guilt-the distruction of what was built-
now come the tears- from a woman only 16 yrs-
in her life-
aboute to intice a child with paradice
but she liven in stryfe-
instilled to her mind is she need cash –
an since she got ass-
sell herself as a hoe-
it goes against her convictiond though-
but the child needs doe-
by first trimester-
she had paid for her 2nd semester-
thoughts began to fester-
to do better plus the baby kicks left her pestered-
scared of what to do for funds-
she knew nothing of the life she was raised as a nun-
but what was done is done-
she found out she was aboute to have a son-
wild cravings-an only bills in her savings-
she sold her soul 9 to 5 then from 5 to 9 she at her J~O slaving-
one day while shaving-
felt the razor edge and thought a list-
of excuses to slit her wrist-
end this-but hse cant dismiss-
her shot and miss for love to be seduced in a kiss-
where was god in this?
At the same time who outside-
but dad getting out his ride-
butterflies in his stomach wanting to ask her to be his bride-
despite the lies-and that brighter days have lighter skies-
but shiny moons-
bring night over her heart and for her to make her womb-
the babies tomb-
as he came inside-to tears that she had cried-
over the love denied-
he found her live in death sadly to a suicide.
a legacy-
end before it beguine i as you can you live in extcay-
when hennesey- cant chase the memory-
and everytime you look at weed-all you see is your seed

WORD~PERFECT 08-20-03 03:41 PM

uppin

WORD~PERFECT 08-20-03 05:03 PM

uppin

rule 08-20-03 10:47 PM

nice drop, had a lot meaning, i no a few people who cud relate tragic mistake but a real topic liked it good flow 1

kamunition 08-21-03 07:59 PM

nice piece had a deep meainingful topic

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SiCkSiCkLy 08-21-03 09:23 PM

nice drop man....feeling it....i know some people that could relate to this also....keep droppin...P C Z

younggadget 08-21-03 10:25 PM

Word~Perfect,you are one of the most illest open mic emcees ever. This was magnificint...Keep dropping man...but work on some of your spelling....

WORD~PERFECT 08-21-03 10:38 PM

my spelling blows yo i type fast never look at the screen i dont want to loose the idea peep my pyramid of war and my battlen myself peace gaurentee satisfaction

DaviD WoRdplay 08-21-03 11:54 PM

Fuck spelling kid.... grammar check isn't needed fa real... do what you do..
I was feeling this... I see you're still on that audio type drop, this was be nice as fuck in audio... you should think about that

Infamous25 08-22-03 10:11 AM

nice drop im feel this kid you got real deep on a realistic sense with ya word choice good drop


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