Bribe VS Amend
 

10 lines u know the rest.........
Ill drop as soon as I can.........

Re: Bribe VS Amend
 

Do Ya Thing Chicken Wing

All Done Sweeti =)


Forcefull Hit To The Head So Hard, Leave Ya Neck For Me To Amend-
This Party Was Done Right From The Start, So Kid Why U Even Attend-
U Seem 2 Pretend You Witty.. People Laugh At Retards Sometimes 2 Show Pity-
Presently U Stand At A Weak State....But Goes 2 Show Why U Changed City-(location)
Like a Triggered Ringer Set 2 Explode, When Amend Answered My Callout-
Board Aint Big Enough For The Both Of Us, Now U Get Trampled Or Fallout-
Coulnt Fashion Ramming Me Down,.Even With That Ecko Rhyno-
Amend Went Straight Into A Fist Before He Left..Damn It Was Right-On-
Type-On Fast And Never Look Back, Even Runnin Verses Get Stopped Flat-
Thought Tapped Amend, And He Knows His Highest Punch Couldnt Top That-

Keep Bribe Conceal'd, So There's No Squeal - Only Ya Pre-Writes Decay
Unreal, U Didnt Know The Deal, But Managed To Gamble Ya Life Away
Im Twice Your Weight, Bribe's Pride Deflates - Like I Was Hittin Ballons
Subside Ya Fate, Put My Knife Away, And Scale This Fish With A Spoon
This Shrimp's Food, But To Chicken To Beef, Like Mixing Noodle Packets
Foolish Faggot - Looks Like This Newb Was Trapped In A Loser's Bracket
Who Introduced U To Rappin, I'll Make Ya Curtains Close. . . .Lights On
And If I Cant Find A Fluke To Work The Votes - I'll Get U To Bribeone1

Amend Says, Fuck The Bribe And Just Bluff The Bookie
Kuz If Your From That Many Periods, U Must Be Pussy-location

This battle was ill......AMEND jus won this shit overall

BreakDown

Bribe:You had nice punches, a few personals about location and fashion, those hit hard and stood out for you. You had normal and good structure.....ya shit was tight wit flow too, but Amend jus edged you on dis.

Amend: You had some really complex and affective punches, you brought some good shit to this battle fo real. Ya finisher was tight too. Ya structure was even and good......ya had a lot of multi's and it had good flow to it. It was pretty funny to. Nice drop.

Vote=Amend

amend man u took that cat so i guess some 1 can beat a regime faggot lol well shit man i give u props u got a nice flow well shit hit me up on my battle against baxter d. wall

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74926

and give an honest vote thankz man and peace 1

2-0, uppin for more votes
keep explaining them
and dont forget to poll
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