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west 08-21-03 02:56 PM

What If I Was Black
 
What If I Was Black(Unfinished) - Goin Audio Very Soon After It's Complete,Heres A Taste.

Hook -

what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i be able to drop tha N bomb and not get slapped/
what if i ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i make millions jus because i was a blackman and i rapped/
what if ma skin was black,what if i owned a mack,would ma ryhmes be considered dope and not considered wack/
what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,or would it make it harder jus because i am black/

What if i was as black as charcoal,would ma heat burn fans up or would i burn maself out and left unconsoleable/
would i be able to rap bout chrome rims and bust-a-rhyme anyplace at anytime,fire it up and not have someone else steal ma shine/
let's play a game,would i be able to waltze through tha hood and not be looked at,would i be able to square dance round wannabe emcee's and not be beat with a bat/
would i be able to show someone ma material and not have them sayin "dark shit but your white",i know that and yo 3 shades lighter and i'd be colourless like sprite/
but unlike all tha soft drink emcee's,i'm a rappin messiah and ma shit is hard aswell as fizzy,not flat and see through,so bow down and worship me on both knees/
if i was black i'd have instant ceridibilty round where i stay,but i'm a white guy so i best play tha background not spit ma rhymes and get outta tha blackmans way/
shit if i was black,like eminem i could wear baggy pants and a tanktop and not be called a wigger,right now i'm jus bein tha way i am hip hop is multicultural but i'm still catchin sniggers/

Hook -

what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i be able to drop tha N bomb and not get slapped/
what if i ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i make millions jus because i was a blackman and i rapped/
what if ma skin was black,what if i owned a mack,would ma ryhmes be considered dope and not considered wack/
what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,or would it make it harder jus because i am black/

If i awoke as a blackman but still felt tha same,i would now have tha typical image aswell as tha brain and tha name/
or would i be called canibus coz theres a similarity to me and him,both smart emcee's usin terms like liberal arts for description,but now we'd have tha same colour of skin/
would tha years of oppression black people have suffered now make more sense,would tha term black power now have me on tha offence,and would i still not want war on iraqi innocents to commence/
if i was black and from cali would i be a blood or a crip,would i be tha definition of hop and hip or would i roll with ma homies smokin in ma whip/
would i be rockin ma bling chains like fifty or singin it's murda on songs like Ja,as a white guy i look as bad wearin bling as a guy thats needs to wear a bra/
like ja me steppin into a hip hop club got peoples thinkin i'm fake,it's as if they think me listenin to hip hop for tha last ten years was mistake/
if i was black would i have tha natural rappin voice,would i still have unpaid bills and an invoice,or would i have already made it and have fans that love me and rejoice/

What if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black/

would bein a baller make me a legitmate hip hop fan,although i throw bricks if i was black ma love of everythin urban wouldn't get me labelled as another eminem fan named stan/
if i was black ma love to stay on tha grime would have people thinkin i've done time,if i was black i could win a grammy like milly vanilly and i would jus have to mime/
if i was black then i'd probly know or havta figure out what actually are grits ,shit if i was black i could probly be able to step into a cypher and not have to cook up a storm to have people think i wasn't pre rehearsin ma spits/
if i was a blackman i would be first served at tha bar and drink henny with no chase,if i was a blackman i would already have a head start in this rap and hip hop contract race/
yo if i was black i would probly have millions of fans and a porche tha colour of cramberry sauce,but if i was black i would probly have a skinny white guy name slim as a boss/

Hook -

what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i be able to drop tha N bomb and not get slapped/
what if i ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,would i make millions jus because i was a blackman and i rapped/
what if ma skin was black,what if i owned a mack,would ma ryhmes be considered dope and not considered wack/
what if ma skin was black,what if ma skin was black,or would it make it harder jus because i am black/


Yo no beef here at all so save tha comments peeps,i aint a racist or shit i'm jus askin afew questions.It's unfinished as i'm hittin some writers block,but feedback would still be welcomed.

Accelerate 08-21-03 03:05 PM

this was a very nice thought povoking open mic piece. It was very good. the flow was confusing but it was a good drop overall. I have no other problems with it. Good shit.

WORD~PERFECT 08-21-03 03:09 PM

NOT AS GOOD AS STICKY'S VERSION BUT NONE THE LESS SOME GOOD QUESTIONS POSED.
WHAT IF I WAS A SPIC OH SHIT I AM DAMNIT NOW ALL THE QUESTIONS IS THROWN OUT THE WINDOW.....LOL

or would i be called canibus coz theres a similarity to me and him,both smart emcee's usin terms like liberal arts for description,but now we'd have tha same colour of skin/

I LIKED THIS GREAT MIND AND THOUGHT IN THAT

west 08-21-03 03:11 PM

Thanx dawg.

MiCsYcKlE 08-21-03 03:12 PM

This was OK
had its ups and downs

But like word said
the original is much better

How about sombody does sumthing like this in a form of the opposite sex

That would be interesting to read

WORD~PERFECT 08-21-03 03:15 PM

I DID IT PAR AND WE CAN COLLAB ON IT TONIGHT IF YOU WANT....I WANT TO MAKE SURE I DONT FREE POST SO I HAVE TO ADD SOMETHING I DIDNT MENTIO EARLIER...
WEST
YOU TACKLED A HUMOROUS TOPIC WITH SERIOUS PHILOSOPHICS THE WHOLE PURPOSE THOUGH IS TO GET THE POINT ACROSS MAKE IT INTERESTING I WANNA SEE YOU DO THIS FROM SUCH AN ANGLE IT WOULD BE SO MUCH SUPERIOR. A PERSON WITH YOUR TALENT COULD PULL THAT OFF AND GET BETTER RECONGNITION FOR WHAT YOU WERE ATTEMPTING TO DO

west 08-21-03 03:17 PM

yea i'm hittin a patch of writers block dawg,my open mic's are usually much longer,i will go back to this and do it justice.

peace

rule 08-21-03 07:27 PM

nice drop...i couldnt find the flow..sorry man...uumm i never read the old version but this was off the hook the word play was good an i liked the meaning good topic man peace

west 08-22-03 12:23 PM

not ma best but uppin for a lil more feedback.

west 08-22-03 01:52 PM

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aguhny 08-22-03 03:02 PM

i liked it thun i ain't even gonna lie while reading it had me thinking what if i was white maybe i need to write about that nice work thun check out some of my battles aight ~1~

west 08-22-03 08:56 PM

thanx for tha feedback anymore ?

Peace

west 08-22-03 09:40 PM

ZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzz........1

B.Baron.J 08-23-03 12:39 PM

man this is the worst,
damn son you got no flow no rythem... kick it playa

west 08-23-03 03:04 PM

LOL dawg u serious,shit i'll slap u around front lines like is ma ho' and i'm ur pimp ya lil biatch.

Newbies floodin RB.


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