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saracen 08-21-03 08:10 PM

dj pulse vs saracen(repost due to failure of votes)
 
can yall hit this battle up cus last time we didnt get enuf votes............................

heres the two verses

Quote:
Originally posted by DJ Pulse
My names dj pulse, not cuz im a dj but cuz im Deceptivly Jammin your “pulse”/
I’ll make you feel like your losin ur life so u’ll leave the rap game and go bak to the “waltze”/
You’ll b dancin like a fairy high off “weed”, newbie, this is a serious lesson in losin that ur gonna “need”/
You know your rhymes remind me of 60’s “clothes”, out of date, been used and their lack of style “shows”/
You’ve got about as much talent as a deaf person listenin to “music”/
Cant feel your own vibe so u don’t know how to “use it”/
But you also remind me of a blind man walkin down the street without a sense of “direction”/
Cuz you cant understand my rhymes, theyre leavin u in the same degree of “perplexion”/
This’ll chew up ur insides so bad that all I’ll leave u with is “skin”/
So u may aswell delete your account now, cuz in that state how do u expect to “win?”/

saracen 08-21-03 08:12 PM

that was his verse heres mine


Quote:
Originally posted by saracen
yo

that shit has PREWRITE written all over it,typed in 4 mins straight,not one personal "diss"//

with rhymes like that u give all mcs from uk a bad name,ur punches were weak as "piss"//

DJ is just a name for a wack MC, callin me a newbie,im bout to have one more win than "you"//

u got no originality or creativetity, ur rhymes are played,next time try and think of sumthin "new//

did u think i was gonna go easy on you,let u off softly,cause were in the same "crew"//

it dont work like that, i cum hard,like sum1 spiked my drink with "viagra"//

dont bother to clap,just get ur coat and leave,cum at me again and ill "drag ya"//

by ur neck,strangle ya till ur spine dissconnects,leavin ur head "flappin"//

cut the circulation,till ur veins expand burst through,and start "mappin"//

definitely not my best, i hit a bit of a writers block but who cares, dj pulse good spit,

Doctor_J 08-21-03 08:37 PM

u fucked up...u have to set the battle up wit a battle poll

DaBanga 08-21-03 08:39 PM

thats why you didnt get votes lol

saracen 08-21-03 08:41 PM

i have set it up again heres the link drop a honest vote

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74785


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