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saracen 08-21-03 08:18 PM
dj pulse vs saracen(repost due to failure of votes)
 
my bad im so tired i set it up wrong first time, well here it is again, can we have sum honest votes. heres his verse

Quote:
Originally posted by DJ Pulse
My names dj pulse, not cuz im a dj but cuz im Deceptivly Jammin your “pulse”/
I’ll make you feel like your losin ur life so u’ll leave the rap game and go bak to the “waltze”/
You’ll b dancin like a fairy high off “weed”, newbie, this is a serious lesson in losin that ur gonna “need”/
You know your rhymes remind me of 60’s “clothes”, out of date, been used and their lack of style “shows”/
You’ve got about as much talent as a deaf person listenin to “music”/
Cant feel your own vibe so u don’t know how to “use it”/
But you also remind me of a blind man walkin down the street without a sense of “direction”/
Cuz you cant understand my rhymes, theyre leavin u in the same degree of “perplexion”/
This’ll chew up ur insides so bad that all I’ll leave u with is “skin”/
So u may aswell delete your account now, cuz in that state how do u expect to “win?”/

saracen 08-21-03 08:19 PM
heres my verse

Quote:
Originally posted by saracen
yo

that shit has PREWRITE written all over it,typed in 4 mins straight,not one personal "diss"//

with rhymes like that u give all mcs from uk a bad name,ur punches were weak as "piss"//

DJ is just a name for a wack MC, callin me a newbie,im bout to have one more win than "you"//

u got no originality or creativetity, ur rhymes are played,next time try and think of sumthin "new//

did u think i was gonna go easy on you,let u off softly,cause were in the same "crew"//

it dont work like that, i cum hard,like sum1 spiked my drink with "viagra"//

dont bother to clap,just get ur coat and leave,cum at me again and ill "drag ya"//

by ur neck,strangle ya till ur spine dissconnects,leavin ur head "flappin"//

cut the circulation,till ur veins expand burst through,and start "mappin"//

definitely not my best, i hit a bit of a writers block but who cares, dj pulse good spit,

Verbatim 08-21-03 08:40 PM
I think Dj Pulse won this battle, he had better flow, punches and vocab,
I didn't find saracen punches to hit as hard,
anyway yeh my vote goes to Dj Pulse

saracen 08-22-03 04:14 AM
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

Godiva 08-22-03 05:45 AM
saracen had better punches and personals, vote=saracen...................................... .................................................. ..............

saracen 08-22-03 01:37 PM
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

saracen 08-22-03 05:39 PM
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................

Aisle Phive 08-22-03 06:06 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by cov kid
saracen had better punches and personals, vote=saracen...................................... .................................................. ..............



exactly^^^


hit this up...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3576#post723576

MC Phoenix 08-22-03 07:53 PM
yo dawg hard 2call an i cant vote ur my mate an ur battlin my bro,blood is thinker than water but i cant vote sorry dawg

saracen 08-22-03 08:01 PM
i didnt no u 2 were brothers! ah well thanx for at least checkin out the battle, thats more than most people............................................ ................................

saracen 08-22-03 09:01 PM
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................

24 karat 08-22-03 09:03 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by cov kid
saracen had better punches and personals, vote=saracen...................................... .................................................. ..............


aint got nuthin else to say........ and dont upp so much... ur only allowed 5.... hit this up please .. no hate no dr... here or there

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75078

Rappad 08-23-03 12:17 AM
ok here's the breakdown and its a weird one
Punches-tie, i guess leaning slightly towards dj
flow-saracen
wordplay-tie
multi's-tie, slightly leaning toward saracen
creativity-neither
structure-tie
Vote-saracen, he had a pretty good ending, but thee reason he won was cuz of the flow

saracen 08-23-03 09:39 AM
uppin for votes, this is the last time i can so can we have some honest votes to finish this battle off, its 4-1 to me so far

Realest-Rap 08-23-03 10:22 AM
Good battle, But I cant vote yet, ,this message may repeat my computers going whacko
Good battle, But I cant vote yet, ,this message may repeat my computers going whacko


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