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.........Anonymiz Jonez vs ~Miraculous~0ne~........
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U spit first no feedin no recyclin no bitin no dr/crew/hate votes good luck |
15 line max......................................(forgot to add to rules).....................................12
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finally foudn it, i'll spit after i eat lunch
word peace.................... ............................... ^word................................. |
going out so i'll spit now like i promised
Ya rap career is going nowhere.....only time u'd rock ice is if u froze stones. Concushion to ya brain...u couldnt keep ya mind together like skeleton bones. Looks like an easy win for me.....unless you start to strip n ride those dicks. Hide ya secret you ridin dawgs for vote......even ya crew name says it all..Tic's. Anonymiz Jonez pullin Trix wit rabbits.....leave the merkin to me u silly faggit. Ya alias is all wrong cuz ya skill ends here...call me doc cuz I'mma end ya habit U reppin the D......all a lie like OJ Simpson sayin not-guilty to a murder plea. Ya crew is a joke jus like u beating me...cuz if U TIC then I must be makin u flea. Commin at you with a 2line finisher..........read your verse that was the killer. The difference in the battle ..........is my verse is organic with no extra filler. *if u dont get soemthing dont vote* Plz explain all votes with good breakdowns etc. |
upping for this kids verse.................
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Aiyyo check it:
U ain't-dope and u can't-cope wit it/ My gat's my scape-gote, leave u in a straight-coat, get it/ If u do, good 4 u, if u don't, oh well/ Just know I'm heaven sent to send u to hell/ Infinite-Skillz will instantly-kill u wit/ Lyrics-or-steel start plannin-ur-will bitch/ Uhhp too-late, u bit the-bait/ I kill this kid like this is Camp Crystal-Lake/ I'll flip-n-drill this bitch, just ask his mom/ I used love her until she told me u were her son/ U readin ur own verse, thinkin that shit raw/ Well, put my dick in ur eye and FUCK WHAT U SAW/ |
Vote=Jones
flow=Jones punches=Jones metas=Jones similies=Jones he killed this kid in my eyes yo Johnes please hit htis up dawg http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75275 |
1-0 my way............................................... .uppin........................................for. ............................votes
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Breakdown For Ya:
Flow-Jones Multi-Jones Punches-Jones Enjoyability-Jones Creativness-One Structure-One Overal-Jones This Was A Basic Killer For One. Your Punches Were Lopsided And you Flow Was Pretty Basic. I Dident See Any Multi's Which Is a No No For Mc's No-A-Days. Try To Elevate And Get Your Spits More Advanced, Like With A Better Vocab And More Direct Punches. |
DeadlySilence thanx for the input.............................still 1-0........................uppin for votes
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Werd^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ hit up my battles wit a honest vote peace ~UNO~ |
Plz dont quote votes..................
read the verses think of something to type ur self,................... |
Deadly silence just cus u dont see dashes dont mean there are no multi's...................
murder-plea making-u-flea was-the-killer no-extra-filler ............newb votes...................... direct punches??????? dissing him n his crew????? whateva playa |
flow-jones
punches-jones metas-jones overall-jones nuff said^^ . |
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