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Dialect OTYP 08-22-03 02:32 AM

ta get it off the chest
 
im sixteen already i got a baby on the way,it makes me happy but it drives me crazy in a way, crazy in the brain stressed out wit no way to support it, im not a killa so now i'll let it be aborted, my girl keep tellin me hunny what we gunna do, its real life ta me may seem fun to you, i pray ta the lord let my baby be ok, im sick of strugglin livin day ta day, in a way id say ive got no place to go, you wouldnt face the problems knowin what i know, is the baby mine was my girl sleepin around, she leaves then pregnant comin back in town, so what.. what should i do now

i gotta get it off my chest i gotta get it off my chest
i gotta get it off my chest i gotta get it off my chest
i gotta get it off my chest i gotta get it off my chest

its not ot long but i had ta say what i was thinkin and get it off my chest tell me ya think

prophiit 08-22-03 02:52 AM

the structure was bad but i found your flow and it was dope in tha beginning...........................

im sixteen already i got a baby on the way
it makes me happy but it drives me crazy in a way,
crazy in the brain
stressed out wit no way to support it,
im not a killa so now i'll let it be aborted,

and then i got lost maybe i stressed tha wrong words, overall the topic is something that you had to talk about and i know what you're going through trust me. it'll get better stick with it and you won't regret a thing. 1

Dialect OTYP 08-23-03 03:24 AM

thanx for the props and everything and advice


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