just something
 

im the G everybody wanna be see six feet under the dirt or cracked out like mcgirt(dirt mcgirt aka O.D.B)/ selling packs spend the dough on macks(gunz) just tryna be known its time to get in the zone get right flows tight/Niggas hate they dont want me to be their cell mate all my whips are up to date scrapin tapin niggas jaw's ruger(gun) lift you up higher than sea saw's/ nigga probably not feeling this im not gonna get pissed just making it known im here to battle right hook land gonna make you stumble man/ Im from the hood where 50 use to play the corner most niggas were gonner's/got bagged(caught by cops) went to the pin became a snitch then the next man's bitch.............ight im out 1 let me kno bout this here

No flow no structure no real topic played concept. I could go on but to keep it simple you have a very basic skill level and you're making it worse by trying to sound like 50 cents. I'm not hating I'm saying find your own style and don't try so hard. 1

i feel you ight yo good lookin out

it aint my best i just did something check out my battle's then you'll kno how i get down ight 1