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ShyLock 08-22-03 11:48 AM

A freestyle dissin the president!
 
ay yall i was bored.. and i was just browsin the net.. until i came upon a page.. readin the president is sendin out people to gain money.. aint that some shit!? well i'm not a fan of him.. well i never was to begin wit.. the page just made it easier for me to go on and write this.. check this peice out:

It starting to look like it’s getting to be too much in Iraq,
It’s not abstract Bush it’s plain to see – you need to retract//

You need to get back all the soldiers – you need to react before it’s too late,
there’s no time to debate – you need to locate the men and women that lives are in stake//

Can’t believe you using them as bait to try to create more to this war,
you don’t deserve to be the president – you’re better suited for the boudoir//

I don’t really think you’ve been keeping up with the news lately,
not trying to break the beauty of this country but why are you acting deadly//

Don’t mean for that to be a compliment – country’s better off with you absent,
you’re blunt! You’re playing around with lives! This isn’t one of your investments//

Or is it? Why are you doing this? Is this because you’re making money out of it?
American spirit sending younglings and accepting the credit//

We don’t always have to be in war you know,
psychos in action! Known to kill an American with they crossbow//

Damn! You bozo! I had a feeling you were going to screw us the moment you were elected,
Like cocking your shotgun - aiming but it isn’t even loaded//

Remember you’re only human – you’re not jagged,
you’re being graded by the people – you’re not admired by all you shit head//

But I guess it just runs in the family – your daughters are a good example,
thought they were to read the bible but they love drinking and getting they facials//

Yes! I got the balls to say it – BITCH! I’m one that doesn’t like you,
some look at you like you a guru – but I’d be the first to burn a chunk off of your statue//

You’re chances of being president next turn is going to be slim,
Jason’s coming by with his knife – be on the look out for you forelimbs//

These rhyming lines may be a crime but I never care for a cowardly bitch like you,
but this is just once in a lifetime chance for you dude – enjoy while you still at your primetime fool//

You’ll never understand why I’m so cruel to a mule like you,
but now I have a better understanding why Eminem’s ass has forever been hating you//

ShyLock 08-22-03 11:49 AM

ay! i'm uppin for some feedback yall! tell me if yall hate it, like it, are against it, or wit it? it dont matter.. just tell me what ya'll think.. aright? take it easy all MCs! i'm outtie!

Accelerate 08-22-03 12:23 PM

I think it's illegal to diss the president during times of war. My sister told me that, it was a law made during the civil war, that freedom of speech was taken away during war times...i'm not sure if its still in effect, but....this drop wasn't good nonetheless.

ShyLock 08-22-03 01:09 PM

aright i see it yo way.. but ay! dont care! freedom of speech is always in effect fo my ass! thanks fo the feedback.. [pssh!][ah ha]

pot1ent 08-22-03 01:31 PM

My view is..unless your certain don't make accusations...n if you read what you believ

your wack

now you better believe it and stop postin stupid open mics...get something that doesn't diss your president...your hardly a politician

ShyLock 08-22-03 01:40 PM

[ah ha] well - thank you - BITCH! [cough] i mean - pot1ent! [ha ha] the reason why it wasn't on the news.. its because they didnt want it out in the news.. i got the URL if you want.. [ah ha] but thanks for the feedback.. take it easy BITCH! [COUGH] I MEAN MC.. i'm outtie! [AH HA]

aguhny 08-22-03 03:14 PM

thun i'm feelin it you hit some major points especially for it to be a freestyle hate to see what you would have to write about da president lol or would i anyways keep posting more hotness aight thun ~1~

Accelerate 08-22-03 03:48 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by ShyLock
[ah ha] well - thank you - BITCH! [cough] i mean - pot1ent! [ha ha] the reason why it wasn't on the news.. its because they didnt want it out in the news.. i got the URL if you want.. [ah ha] but thanks for the feedback.. take it easy BITCH! [COUGH] I MEAN MC.. i'm outtie! [AH HA]



[ah ha] you don't always believe what you see on the net[cough]there was a site that had George Bush as the anti-Christ[ah ha] Maybe, We don't care if you think you have freedom of speech, i'll laugh if you get arrested [ah ha] ay your an herb i guess[cough]dumb newbie. ay you need help.

prophiit 08-22-03 11:10 PM

freedom of speech is always in affect even in times of war. this was a free/keystyle so it wasn't bad. your plitics are a little weak but your emotion came across. 1









p.s. for those who are uninformed please do not make comments, you only make yourself look bad. thank you.

Accelerate 08-22-03 11:12 PM

^^if your talking to me, then its my sister that told me, because she learned that or whatnot, that Abe Lincoln made that Law up, its not one of his popular things if noticed.

ShyLock 08-24-03 09:32 AM

SkiddLeZZ [AH HA] and i'muh fuckin herb?! daw! you FUCKIN LISTEN TO YO SISTUH! herb ass BITCH! [AH HA!] and i'm the herb?! [AH HA] you funny daw.. REAL funny.. [AH HA] (SIKE!) well as usual! i'm still uppin fo feedback.. i appreciate yall comin back at this.. take it easy MCs.. peeycce!

WORD~PERFECT 08-24-03 10:03 AM

LOOK AS A SONG TOPIC I DISLIKE IT FAUGHT TO BE A CITIZEN AND NOW I FIGHT AS A CITIZEN AND SOLDIER FOR THIS PLACE.......
AS A SONG IT WAS GOOD YOU HAD THE ELEMENTS AND WORDS T MAKE PEOPLE REACT OBVIOUSLY AND ASO IT HAD STYLE KEEP BUILDING POP YOU DID WELL.

ShyLock 08-24-03 10:16 AM

ay! thanks bruh.. your feedback is appreciated deeply! as fo the othuh onez too! even some up there was hatin.. i still want the feedback.. come on now! more feedback yall! this is gettin hot as hell! take it easy MC! i'm outtie!

$tyle/$witch 08-24-03 01:32 PM

lol.....fuqq da president......lol....nasty ish son....1ne

$tyle/$witch 08-24-03 01:33 PM

sum shit wuz weak though


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