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-InVy- 08-22-03 06:52 PM

"My Last Breath" (Quite Possibly Tha Best Song Ive Layed Down.. Off The Lp.. ENJOY!!)
 
New track.. produced by sho down...
its dope... prob my best lyrically.. emotion and all that good shit..
i still dont have a condensor.. so the quality isnt ill yet.. but it soon will :)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/invasionmusic.htm

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=523991&q=Lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=523991&q=Hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=523991

first track...

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...OpeY... 08-22-03 07:36 PM

its pretty hot dawg. use some EQ and balance out the mids and highs. add some low frequency to your voice. i just got a new condensor. im glad i dont need to deal with that bullshit anymore.

-InVy- 08-22-03 07:54 PM

lol yeh tru

wonderground 08-22-03 09:04 PM

Damn!! You got serieus skills kid! But the beats gotta bumb! sorry kid! We need 2 hook up though, we're a producers duo, check a snippet of our latest productions @ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/w...productions.htm we ought 2 make beautifull babies together!!

p'z

p.s. Can you upload the acapella of this joint? We will make a remix of this joint if we can.

contact me @ victorcharly4wondergroundproductions@hotmail.com

C-NiCe 08-23-03 12:59 AM

the beat is type hot.....delivery was good, concept of the song is serious.....definitely feelin it.....flow was crispy, vocal presence was definitely good....hook was definitely hot......this gets a 8/10, in my opinion........keep doing your thing dawg.....OnE





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Orikle 08-23-03 10:20 AM

Fucking Ill Mun...Flow, Delivery And Emotion Were All On Point Very Nicely...Hook Is Nice...Lyrically It Was Well Done...All Round This Was A Top Track...Quality Was Good But To Be Like Pro Polished It Would Be Fucken Smooth...Keep It Up.......Pz.........

-InVy- 08-23-03 03:07 PM

yeh.. thanx.. appreciate it..

as soon as i get my setup.. sound quality gonna be boooomin

and im checkin that site now

-InVy- 08-23-03 03:08 PM

yo man.. get at me on AIM.. i kinda like that beat..... the first one on it

Tuned Root 08-24-03 07:18 AM

I really did enjoy this, your flow is onpoint throughout the whole track and it was very obvious of a good delivery and somewhat of decent mic presence. The emotion was enough to get me nodding my head and basically fit the beat exactly, mos' definite. Overall, a very nice track and yes, probably one of your "better" ones, because I was listening to some of your other material..

-InVy- 08-25-03 01:21 AM

no doubt.. thanx... glad you listened to some of my other shit to :)

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