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Topic 08-22-03 06:57 PM

lost
 
(slow beat)
im sure ur not worried about ur personality
just ur painted image that u wear distastivly
imediatly greeted by why ur breaten out heavy last breaths
and u say grace because ur face is bout to embrace death
beaten out of all odds because u were said not to be "cool"
dressin like all the preps, sayin fuck baby steps movin up ur a fool
sit and drule in class over a girl, u cant have, so u try to change
become deranged from hate because she still outa ur range
become insane with vengence and ur not yourself anymore
tryed to become "in" but some dont respect a whore

(beat picks up)
tired of false acusatations and discrimination placed on my plate
played the cards i was dealt, cant say that my life is that great
but u know what lets turn this shit around
tired of bein sad lets get our feet off the ground
we got so much to live for, why are we killin ourselves?
jus cuz u got skeletons in ur closets? Well i got some on my shelves
slit our wrists, hangin, shootin, when we got nuttin to die for
peopele hate u? people call u fat, ugly? what they gota lie for
divorce, many go through it, and im a victem
but its better then the fighten and the sickness
reality is sickness, lifes got so many routes
u can either throw a perfect game or get a blow out
so hang with u hang with chill with ur friends
dont follow the in crowd dont follow the trends

(slow beat)
im sure ur not worried about ur personality
just ur painted image that u wear distastivly
imediatly greeted by why ur breaten out heavy last breaths
and u say grace because ur face is bout to embrace death
beaten out of all odds because u were said not to be "cool"
dressin like all the preps, sayin fuck baby steps movin up ur a fool
sit and drule in class over a girl, u cant have, so u try to change
become deranged from hate because she still outa ur range
become insane with vengence and ur not yourself anymore
tryed to become "in" but some dont respect a whore

(slow beat)
dont sin, u throw back god like he posed to be on ur side
for the ride, get drunk and high all night, u cant decide
go to college or drop outa highschool
tellin ur great memorys sittin on a bar stool
make somethen of your self, u make u
personality makes u, life will take u
or break u, make mistakes and it will degrate u
mind sits and ur brain starts to migrate
soul chafes, cought up in the game
lost for life and ur the only one to blame
tryed to be someone else, and now ur not the same
change and now ur lost without the game

Topic 08-22-03 11:10 PM

uppin for feedback.......................................... ......

Alias-C 08-23-03 12:29 PM

damm, no one replied on this yet? shit... yeah the topic I thought was pretty deep, not too original, but not overdone... i'm feeling the concept... flow was aight, vocab was decent... yeah, I liked this...
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Topic 08-23-03 03:42 PM

thanx for replyin, still uppin

Topic 08-23-03 08:27 PM

uppin for replys. im slept on again


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