iceberg420 vs GChand (only 300+ posts)
 

no biting
no freeposting
no feeding
no crew
no hate
no dr
only people with 300+posts can vote
10-12 lines
verses must be in by midnight EST (i would do earlier but i gotta b goin sumwhere soon)

this is my check in

oh and xplained votes only................ no quoted explainations..................................... ......

****Quick Note "Contagious" is my Crew and GC's part of the "Verbal Rapists"




Read my avi.............................................

Ok Merk Time Lets GO!

GChand demanded this Merk.....And Now U can't Escape-this/1 (Called Me Out in Bitch Slapped)
Bitch I'm iLL and "Contagious".... u just a Pussy "Verbal Rapist"/2
This win.....Just try-N-take-this Bitch It Just wont Happen/3
Like Gurls sayin they "Like you" becuz of ya skills in rappin/4 (LoL)
Smack-him..... Sum1 Please!! This stupid bitch gettin on my nerves/5
U Worst then them little whiny ass "Win-Hungary" Motha Fuckin HERBS!/6
So Now it's time for U to get what U deserve/7
An ass kickin so bad...Its only worthy of callin it a MERK!/8
Fuckin 'Freshmen' you'll always remained 'out Classed'/9
By this 'Senior' vet takin ya Lunch Money while I'm kickin yo ass/10

Gimme Yo Lunch Money Nigga, Its over...............

yo i will vote when g spits.....and can you guys hit up my battles with karat and stars honestly....thanks....

yo' i'll hit this up wen u both spit... nice verse iceburg... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75078
please vote there

Iceberg you actin' hard, talkin' lyke you've been merkin' every one//1
But look at ya record you've been merked twice as much and outdone//2
I'm hittin' ya organs till ya pissin' kidney stones, & piercin' fist threw bone//3
And when ya fuckin' ya bitch she screamin' "Why can't you make me moan?!"//4
I ain't a biter, but I'm throwin ya punches right in tha trash//5
Ya lyrics are bad, ya write down a word and lose tha battle in a flash//6
Fuck you chump, you ain't takin' dis battle if this tha best you ever done//7
Cuz mah drop is killin yours lyke tha way Tupac was wit a gun//8
You must work out & drink slim fast, cuz all you always seem to gain losses//9
After this battle, your body parts will be thrown upon various crosses//10

uuuuuupppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn for votes 1...............................................

i think gchand took it wit punches... no hate no dr....iceburg u talk alotta shit.. but props to ya and gchand... peace..

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to be completely honest.....heres how i see it.

Iceburg- your spit was alright, i guess. Some really basic stuff though...like this:
Smack-him..... Sum1 Please!! This stupid bitch gettin on my nerves/5
U Worst then them little whiny ass "Win-Hungary" Motha Fuckin HERBS!/6
that second part was just a streched out insult....doesnt really flow well and weakens the overall punch. Overall, u needed more complexity and some length in ur rhymes.

GChand- your verse was alright as well. But heres what separated it from Iceburgs: the better punches and one personal. While some lines were played, it was better than Iceburgs....your beginning and ending line were strong.

Vote - GChand, by a small margin. If I was you Iceburg, i would ask for a rematch....ive seen you do better than this. peace......

^^yup

shit i voted wrong......MOD CAN YOU CHANGE IT................................................ ..................................................

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