IILConceptz Vs DeMoNiAc
 

10-15 lines....I'll spit as soon as u check in first....

Check in first..............whatever.........im here second?.........LOL j/k...................in............................ .........................
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SPIT...............................
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You a pussy?..........

fuck this some mod close this .......he pusssssssyed out........
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.................................................. ............fukkin no show pus

in my books you're nameless, brainless,/
don't put up a fight and i'll make this battle quick and painless/
if i gave you coaching, then i'd consider you ill-advised/
i don't expect you to get that, it's better than anything u've ever devised /
you're 0-0 right? consider this the beginning of your demise/
This fake emcee right here, is lookin for stardom/
Somebody get my ass an "astray", so I can "smoke his problems"/
My bars cause brain damage like cell block prison fights/
K.J couldn't "cum cold" if his dick started "drippin ICE"/
You little faggot ass bitch, why you fuckin with me?/
Here's a "First Class" ticket from me "too the cemetery"/
I'm not mean i'm tryin to prepare ya',/
you couldn't be sick if you got mixed with yellow fever and malaria/
It's "Ludacris" for you even thinking that you can beat me/
And believe me this isnt "Word of mouth" the whole site is with me/

fuck my bad I put K.J its a slang thing my homies and me say.....well ne ways it means a wack ass emcee....cuz we got a friend named k.j who thinks hes the shit

what the fuck are u talking bout bitch...spit ur shit sock face k.j............................................... .................................................. ...........quit freepostin man

You spitted lol ........heres my verse

Bitch, ur style skips more lines and chops worse than a broken-record//
You suffer from verbal retaliations and reimbursement for humiliation//
U prolly,have sex tru your left hand and on screen some hentai-animation//
I detest ur verbal conquest, prophecized fukkin-bitch that ur no ill emcee//
Fake-as-can-be, u lack skill, and you look up to somone who spits like me//
Wack-bitch try battlin me,lmao tell me fag what's ur fake-ass really thinkin//
Could put real expensive-cologne all over ur rhymes and they still be stinkin//
You a poor kid, really feel sorry for you, scrappin dimes ur way of gettin cash//
But yo, face-facts ur fukkin dates expired.....ur stink worst than a can of trash//
Demoniac?...lol, you think you have a nice verse but i tell you its-a-mess//
But yo i know why your ass think's your smooth ur-filled-with-herb-al-ness//*Herbal-Essence

both verses weren't great, but i'll give it to ill, because he had a few decent lines. ya both need some elevation and shit. Peace.

ok ...thnx uppin

vote: demoniac


flow: D
punches: D
Multis: ILL
Personals: niehter
Vocab: D
Metas/similes: ILL
This battle goes to: D

nice battle guys, i enjoyed it for real good shit

peace............

i dunt agree on your break down but its cool......uppin.............
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beter vocab LOL, he used basic words man........btw.........but its all cool...

Hmmmmm...Not A Great Battle...But Ill Had More Original Lines...The Other Cat Had Choppy Flow And Weak Punches...Ill Had Somw Streched Lines...Something For You To Work On...

Vote - IILConceptz