**The Aftermath**
 

No matter how nice your raps form on this forum, these niggas still ignore ‘em//
Like you ain’t got skills, and they call ill what real rappers call boredom//
They poor ‘em on the boards, with childish and immature metaphors//
Spitting verses versus real bol’s ( boys), but they still feel the rewards//
I’m not complaining, just no-braining a keystyle, but for the meanwhile it’s a thesis//
Still tryna come up how a little fuck came up with a win when I ripped him to pieces//
Maybe I’m a sore-loser who sobs or a producer who’s a snob//
Or a victim who was bashed caused by the aftermath of a blowjob//
They got me all knuckled up, cuz some herbs from the burbs buckled up//
And jumped on this nigga’s dick like a little bitch in double dutch//
And yeah, I’m whining cuz I verbally pulled the glock up out the linen//
Designing all my shots in the verse with a pen full of Malice like that nigga from “Grindin”//
But still got caught when I brought that nigga’s skull on a plate, detonated his face-//
Merked his manhood history- but they still gave that lil’ nigga a victory//
And this shit is very bizarre cuz every bar he spit was so ‘Juvenile’-//
I jumped to the pictures thread just to see if 24 Karat had some gold teeth in his smile//
You can go peep it (the battle) in a while, but I’m still not done; this is called “blowing off steam”//
So allow me to “ventilate” against those who’s tryna blow of 2-15//
Better yet, let me reset, gather my thoughts and never forget//
That despite the new screen name this spit flame was always a vet//
I’m probably this board’s biggest threat, when I rap, I’m hot//
I bring these niggas hell but if all else fails, I can always take up pop//

It's Philly, baby.

yo i can easly spit and riches the thing u know how rap is

sandwiches dog i'll put outta yur mysery son the only way u gets

recognize is black history month look nigga this chapter is done

what u get outta this anotha loss son shit ain't funny when start

losin it probably don't bother cause that's tha only thing u doin yo

look i'll battle whoeva but if nigga go against me dey ain't cleva

this nigga desperate for some holla at yur boy ace a.ka. young

buck

lol............................nice drop, stayed on point, flowed very well, nice multi's. metaphors, good piece

thanks, fam...uppin this mufucka one time.....holla at ya boy.

Ace: WTF Was That!

Rhyming/Flow
Your Flow here Was Sick, It Was Suprisingly Smooth, Your Bars Were The Same Length Preety Much Throughout Which Really Helps "pan It Out", Nice....8/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Was Lackin' A Bit On The Vocab. You Had NIce Metas Though, And Good Wordplay..Work On Your Overall Vocab Though...6/10

Concept/Topic
You Rapped About Alotta Good Relevant Things here, MOstly To Do With Rb. Bars Like: "Maybe I’m a sore-loser who sobs or a producer who’s a snob//
Or a victim who was bashed caused by the aftermath of a blowjob//"

n'
"I’m probably this board’s biggest threat, when I rap, I’m hot//
I bring these niggas hell but if all else fails, I can always take up pop//" - Were nice, Good Self Glorification There..8/10

Overall
7/10, It Was A Good Freestyle, Flow Was Sick, But Work ON Your Vocab A little More..:)

Word!

Thanks for the love, fam, keep it crackin over there in Ireland mate! Holla. And I'm uppin this mu'fucka 2 times.

all he did was bitch about him getting a raw deal.

this nigga needs practice

Just uppin' this thang.

YO I GO WITH RHYTHMIC ON THIS BUT I ENJOYED EVERY LINE STILL IT WAS WELL COMPOSED AND IF YOUR IN LOOKS FOR A CREW THAT JUST STARETED I OFFER MINE HOLLA AT ME

tight ish...1ne

IM DIGGING THE FIRST FLOW IT WAS TIGHT KEEP THEM COMMING AND HAVE ALL OTHER FAKE RAPPERS RUNNING
KEEP IT TIGHT ITS THE SHARKS LURKING IN THEM GLOOMY WATERS

Uppin this thang...holla.

I'm gon run with this ball like crazy..means: uppin^^^

^please please STFU!!!!!!

Now on to 215 i understood everything you were trying to get across. The flow was smooth and you stayed on top of the topic all the way. The vocab was light but i think you planned it that way. not only did i understand you plight i sympathize...............

No matter how nice your raps form on this forum, these niggas still ignore ‘em//
Like you ain’t got skills, and they call ill what real rappers call boredom//
They poor ‘em on the boards, with childish and immature metaphors//
Spitting verses versus real bol’s ( boys), but they still feel the rewards//

Everything about this piece shows a natural talent and i'm pretty sure you're a dope audio head too.......8.5/10