rap guerilla Vs N LitEnd
 

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Good Luck

my lyrics pierce u like samuri swords/
I leave you deceased like dem iraqi boys/
l.m.s. shoot big guns not baby toys/
you aint got a chance of beatin me /
i dont even no why u acept da beef/
big dog round here u should call me chief/
pretty son il be rhymin elite/
im hot out here just like elliot ness/
comin at me betta bring ya best/
talk real slick get da shoddy to ya chest

come on keep the battle goin i want to see more in the bars come wit somethin suffient enought for battle and i know this aint bitch slapped but i got winner and looser

Look Kid, Stop Praising Youself, To Be Honest...You Suck
Didnt See A Punchline, How U Gonna Win You Dumb Ass Fuck
Why Do I Need To Come Hard Wen I Have No Competition
Damn Kid, I Guess You Accepted My Callout For The Recognition
Spit Wit Incision, Lyricaly Disectin Ya Mind So Your Lost For Words
How You Gonna Elevate Wen Your Rhymes Wont Allow Forwords
I'll Split Both Ya Eyes So You Can 'Four' See This Victory
Rap Guerilla, Who Are You? You Dont Mean Shit To Me
Well Its Been Fun, I Killed You In With Half The Time
You Cats Have Nine Lives, But I Gave You 10 Life'Lines'

umm yeah....

both need...

elevation...

not bad for N...
since he's...
a newbie...

vote- N

yep...
other cat...
was horrible...

What?...

Look Kid, Stop Praising Youself, To Be Honest...You Suck
Didnt See A Punchline, How U Gonna Win You Dumb Ass Fuck
LOL, nice feedin....punch
Why Do I Need To Come Hard Wen I Have No Competition
Damn Kid, I Guess You Accepted My Callout For The Recognition
nice flow...ok line
Spit Wit Incision, Lyricaly Disectin Ya Mind So Your Lost For Words
How You Gonna Elevate Wen Your Rhymes Wont Allow Forwords
Nice vocab...ok punch
I'll Split Both Ya Eyes So You Can 'Four' See This Victory
Rap Guerilla, Who Are You? You Dont Mean Shit To Me
was ok line
Well Its Been Fun, I Killed You In With Half The Time
You Cats Have Nine Lives, But I Gave You 10 Life'Lines'
nice finish

Better verse than that gorrilla....one sided battle, end took this by better punches,flow,vocab......better overall vote=End

true true//..................hit up my battle with fundamentals and thuggedoutg

Thanx For The Votes.
3-0 My Way.
Uppin For The Rest.
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O yea you both need some serious elevation but ...............end was pretty ok for a new-b........................
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Mistik...you ain't need to come harder than what you gave. that other kid was garbage, believe me, shit is good. Basically both verses were weak, but one was weak for a reason,lol.
vote-N-LitEnd

nlitend get smy vote for better structure and beter punchlines..both need some elevation but gud...

vote-nlitend