The Struggle (Debut Song)
 

This is not a freestyle... My first self produced... i think i slipped on a small part i finished it at about 6 in the morning... and started it at 1 in the morn.... but yea everyone wont feel this one im sure, but i do.. maybe cuz its my life i dunno. so holla back some feedback and drop a link if u wanna......
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uppin wtf? no views ;/

uppin.. Will someone give me some feedback or sumtin... shit... y is it so hard to take 2 mins to type a little sumtin.........................

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Ha ha ha ha ha ha, so here we are. It's the other way around now huh. Unlike you I will not be biases.

Ok first things first, how old are you son, cause it siound like you 9 years old on the joint. Your voice is soft, like a babies ass. Your vocals lack emotion. Sound like you readin it. I became, a little uninterested, until I heard the ...uhh...was that a hook. At first I thought you was on some R. Kelly Shit (C'Mon Lil Girl Hold ya head up).

Nevertheless, good effort, you had to get ya naked ass out here sometime.

lol... actually the emotion was good when i recorded.... but in the mixing to make it fit the beat it makes the sound more monotone which takes away from the emotion..... but yea anyways i did it soft for a reason.... and i got one more year of highschool.... but yea i figured everyone wouldnt feel it... but thanx for ya comment/feedback.

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You got it backwards man, you make your voice fit the beat. Actually they're supposed to compliment each other,............................................ .................................................. ...................

wasn't really feelin it.....beat was garbage.....production was ok.....ummmmm lyrics were ok.."going to school with the same high yellow t-shirt"....lol....yea sum things you say really make sense if other people understand you and what you really spittin.....but you sound like dead, or like you tryin to rap loud but you can't.....you should work on this track a little more and make sum changes, then it should be straight.....holla!






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