Pledge (1-0) vs. Sureal (0-0)
 

Check In: Tuesday.

Verses: Thursday.

Alright, The Rules...

16-48 Line Limit...

No Bullshit...

Topic: Buying Freedom
(I Did Not Pick The Topic)

aight not bad topic...see what a can do........in !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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checkin in, howya doin girl

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am aight....a thought a quz battlin surreal lol oh well here we goooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ur own corruption
 

Corrutption rules the world today
as long as you got money nothing will stand in your way
it used to be te colour of you skin that delt your hand
but now it dont matter if yo polka dotted, money rules the land
the topics of wheelin dealin convince people to roll on by
turnin a blind eye to wrong dooers as long as their shares are runnin high
dont matter if little children sew yo clothes a two oclock in tha morning for ten cents
aslong as they dont fall apart when you wash them you dont care if you know about them
Youd watch nuclear waste being pured straight into the sea
thoughts runnig through your head *at least the moneys right for me*
Bribing police to get you off the hook when you do something wrong
pat their pockets full of dollar bills *im sure we can get along*
Once in a blue moon you will find one respectable person
who knows the dealings of life and has cause for concern
and when you show them the money they will laugh in your face
tell you politley to stick it up your ass and push your hand out of their way
money had made your life so damn easy from the start
since you never had to work for nthing theres no hope left in your heart
you dont care for anything no more your feeling all collapsed
money cant buy you happiness or love or any other part
but when you try to use your get out of jail free card
remember money got you intothis mess and you can never depart
you bought your freedom in so many ways, your colledge funds, university grades
the money in your pockets will one day fade
suddely yu wake up to realise that your trapped within your life
you have two beuatiful children, a gold digging wife
you realise that you have been trapped with all the money you own
and that you cant be sure everyone is genuine in the admiration they have shown
and youll be left with nothing, poverty sure to overcome
you bought your life with your money, but can you buy your freedom?

America is free hard work made it what it is, money passed through hands is superstitious//
myths, our country wasnt bought, read my lips, freedom of speech gives me the right to do this//
time machine back two centuries please, back when the moon was still made of cheese//*
back when the US was still new, flexing free limbs politically they were then the proud and the few//
minorities died no flowers sent in lieu, power taken not given who did it go too//
white men no women this was too true, white shovanistic society best off to be a caucasian lad//
wild west there was freedom to be had, ppl could be bad, but oppression was the fad//
its sad, strong men to do the work but slaves they had to have//
lazy is as lazy does lazy seems to stack, takin others freedom as their own, character lacks//
then, like today, minorities tended to stay in packs//
complaints heard from ppl without facts, not effected cuz it happened generations back//
things was like checkers, white hands played both reds and blacks//
because of freedom held back, took years to reach pax//***
land illegally bought checks passed, ground of ancestors shrinking fast//*****
balance of freedoms tipping to the east, indians fought wars where they used to smoke in peace//
in Africa tribal wars still raging no sign of aging, one tribe captures another time for caging//
watch on screen seems like staging ,stuff was real amount of wealth didnt change-things//
money piles was ranging, only helped fuel the war ppl was waging//
in the end noone wins loss of life is amazing, astounding the raizings//
ppl with thoughts seem hazy that freedom can be bought should be shot... history proves them crazy//

*popular belief in the 19th century: moon was made of cheese lol

***Pax means peace in latin

*****Illegal land bought, i was referring to things like the louisana purchase and how US bought land from France... land that really belonged to the indians

where are the votes ppl? i have actively voted on other's battles.

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Ok i don't usually read topical, but heres my vote....

Vocab from both was tight, not to complex but not to simple, i was feeling pledges mroe, you noe connected more with it sorta thing, sounded like it was wrote from experience, and as the saying go "the story depends on the teller"... Anywayz flow was about even Pledge jus' took that aswell...

So

Flow = Pledge
Consistency = Even
Vocab = Even

Prti close but i'd give this one to Pledge cause it sounded more deep....
My bad if i didn't vote properly cause i don't do this often...

My Vote = Pledge

Pce

aight thanks.....1-0 sorry Pax lol after all yo ma tag partner lol but you verse was good...oh well its up to them really...uppin

its ok pledge lol, u had a great verse, we just had two different concepts... history and life stories.. history is just the way i think lol anyway we need some votes!!! all these ppl in this league are fuckin inactive as hell

i like Pax's references to tha past, both had solid verses, tha rhyme shceme seemed to get better with Pax's verse, overall tha rhyme scheme for both was ok, both flowed aight, this was a close battle, i believe that Pax won by a hair, tha end of his verse made all of tha difference. His verse seemed to gradually get better, i would work on stayin solid, good battle
vote- Pax

uppin to get this settled lol 1-1 respectable voting..................................hurry up am board.....a think they should bring back the idea of people have to vote on another five battles....things were better like that

^^word... problem is i dont think there are 5battles that ppl dropped in. only like 3 active battles

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OK-my Opinion~~~

very intersting a topic with two different views on it good work both of u. But im going to have to go with the one that of course entertained me the most and which i felt was deeper.....so again props to both but i have to go with Pledge...............



vote=PledGe

i feel that this was a close one..both came good and both pieces were fairly entertaining. however, i feel that Pledges verse was deeper and had the better content overall. Pax was nice as well but Pledge just took it.

good job guys.

vote-Pledge